You are my faith
When I have no hope
You are my love
When I have reasons to hate
You are my wind
When I have no wings to soar,
No one to call friend
You warm my heart
When it is blue
You are my thoughts
When I have no clue
You are my words
When I can’t say I love you
You are the light that completes me
You are my reflection in the dark
You are my heart
You are the shade of love
That sets me free
You were my savior that passed me on the street
That saw through my mask I was wearing
You took away the lies,deceit
I was carrying
Now I am complete
Now I am free
Before you came onto my life
I was just half the man the man
I thought I could be
Now I have new life
You are my life
You are life.
by EARL HALL
Message from the author: This a poem i wrote when i let God come into my life.
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yeah i can understand how it feels when you came to know the existence of god.and its really good to let god come in your life.
That good that was very powerful it was great im out of words too say all I can said is that touch my heart
i really like this poem great job
that is one great poem i like it verry much
Thats gud wish i had a girlfriend 2 tel thats 2. Kip up the gud work
this has an awesome feeling to it, and i’m glad that i became a christian too.
interesting and powerful poem but doesn’t need God to be an ifluence just be yourself
THIS WAS A TOUCHING POEM I REALLY LIKED IT.
it is gud so kip up the gud work it touch my heart knowing that without GOD we are nothing and we are empty so lets always believe in we will be safed
that is so awesome that blessed my heart wow really awesome
Great job! This poem is truly touching.
That was beautiful and great in letting God into your heart! love it and have a beautiful life in HIM and don’t change a thing.
amazing!!God is our ALL.
“Silent Flight.”
In the silence
The clarity of your voice,
Climbs high
Upon the eagle’s wings.
The chains of doubt
That imprison my soul,
Fall away beneath my feet.
In the freedom and majesty
Of the sentinels gaze,
Faith is strengthened
And hope returned
To a weary heart,
Upon the silent flight
Of eagle’s wings.
Chris Roe,
Norfolk,
England.
GREAT
wow, this poem was awe-inspiring and hear-warming..i mean, it can really touch one’s heart..yes, HE’s our life! our ultimate Lord and savior…
wow, this poem was awe-inspiring and heart-warming..i mean, it can really touch one’s heart..yes, HE’s our life! our ultimate Lord and savior…
awww i truly feel dis way wiy tay
“You are life” This is a very touching poem, Earl. I like it. Keep on blessing others with your writing.
Clary12o.
love your poem
hi, i really found that u r jst like me. i too have the same faith towards God.he is simply marvelous……………..i have one person in my life whome i consider s god…..i feel that god has send him s an angel………..ur poetry is really heart touching………………
I am a politics student, but even i can deliver critique on your poem. your poem was too dull. you read it fast yet it is slow; and that’s usually a good thing, but not in this case. next time, before you navigate through your heart towards the point of expressing your feelings to God, embark on a journey of your past to give us, the readers, relevant insight. also, remember that critique is the number we dial when we seek improvement, not a set of statements that is conducted to destroy a writer. you have a talented mind, entertain the notion that you need to improve for only then does your mind start to become wise and only then you can improve it
Wow!! Aftr a long time i hav cum across such a nice touching poem….aftr dis if u write pls mail me one copy in my mail ID
I just wanna say I am going through a really hard time in my life trying to fight addiction and find god and I am so confused and sad and lost just looking for an answer… your poem is beautiful….
Good piece work & imagination
please just read this… I love you mommy
that was soooooo long also borde
I understand, i have loved God all my life, im totally religious, but…. this is realy a non-understandable “poem” it really is a good use of words, but just because it id in poem form. does not mean it is a poem, some words or phrases or stanzas are not meant to be in poems… u r the #1 example.
This is really not what a poem reader wants. and when poem writers set out to critic, or inspire themslves…… NO!!! i love God truly, but no.. not this poem. sorry Sr. Earl Hall.
Nice poem itz nice whatz your name
Hello (says in high voice) I’am fit come and see me in Facebook and that’s go for a date, Yeah!!
marvelous
ur so stuped
great writeup. its a love letter to god
I like that, good writing…
I love this poem. it totally reminds me of my boyfriend, Ciphus.