A big burden rests upon your shoulders,
if I wish to help you with it,
would you share it with me?
a gentle warmth emanates from your voice,
if I wish to cocoon myself in it,
would you speak to me?
an endless beauty reflects from your eyes,
if I wish to lose myself in it,
would you look at me?
a distinct divinity radiates from your face,
if I wish to fill myself with it,
will you let me stare?
a soothing caress is felt from your skin,
if I wish to cover myself with it,
would you touch me?
beautiful thoughts flow from your mind,
if I wish to melt away in it,
would you think about me?
boundless love fills up your heart,
if I wish to be with you,
would you give me a place in it?
by christo michael
Message from the author: I dedicate this to a girl whom i love..though she doesn’t feel the same way for me as yet,i hope there will be a day when she does.i hope u like it and do pass your comments.thank you for reading and have a nice day
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gud one..better than promise!! Well done!
I relate to this poem because am in a similar situation.I hope things work out for the both of us.
i love this, thank you!!!
This is beautiful! I have thoughts on this poem… things that inspire me from it… but things… better kept to myself. Sometimes… the love one feels… the connection… when a heart finds another heart… it is something that has boundaries that separate… and cannot be crossed across the distance. Not sure that makes sense to anyone but me… but a lovely poem! Keep writing and inspiring others!
beautiful poem cristo, very heartfelt. its nice to hear me express their feelings too. keep them coming!
god bless
gabrielle
I love this poem. It is very touching.
your love is true……. can be felt from your thoughts.
Touching one
Beautiful! Great job; this is so sweet.
hey I really liked this poem it actually explains everything I feel right now for this guy…I wish I could tell him how I feel even tho I got hurt already it wasnt overly bad but it was enough for me to walk away but im completely in love with him and im not even sure he loves me back but hes the one who walked back into my life last week and I hope that things do work..I wish i could write something like this to him bec Im sure that he would completely sink and see how i truly feel…I want so bad for him to feel the same although before he said he loved me but it was too soon I think i ran bec of my past..but ya..you write extremely well and this poem made my day…I might just have to show it to him bec it says what I need to…keep writing Id like to hear more from you..have a good one..and thanks again for making my day…
you are a good writer. I like this a lot. good job.
hey…
goooooooood one!
a beautifull poem for the luckiest gal…
ahan !