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Will God Comfort My Heart?

My heart is bleeding
My soul is very tired
To God I am pleading
That my soul be acquired
A sad life I am leading
God’s mercy is required
Every second I sadly spend
To mend I am ready to bend
Lend me bliss, prayer I send
I am a regular loser
Who has faced the worst
I am a defeated chaser
Quenching losses’ thirst
I am searching for an eraser
To remove agonies from breast.

by MV.Venkataraman

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1 Kristen McKinney May 25, 2009 at 6:56 PM

Awesome! I love it so much.

2 jessica June 3, 2009 at 11:07 AM

god helps everybody
and if people don’t beleive in him
well thats their loss

3 maris August 4, 2009 at 6:09 AM

i love this because i can relate to it

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