I remember that dazzling smile,
I remember that joyful laugh,
I remember those brilliant eyes,
And I wish those memories weren’t of the past.
I remember you holding me,
I remember you loving me,
I remember you kissing me,
And how I wish those things would last.
I remember you telling me goodbye,
I remember those words that made me cry,
I remember those memories that make me want to die,
And I wish those words would fade away.
by Dakota Marie Wynn
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i lke d words
Aww,
I remember going through that kind of stuff when we broke up.
I was so sad….
i really love yur poem its the best it reminds me a lotof him!!!!
i love the rhythm and rhyme in your poem,,oh and how could i forget the words that you used,,? they are so sweet and touchy…stay blessed…
i love this poem….. everyone has that one heart brake that they cant forget i know i have ,its the feeling that cant be compared to any other and this poem shows that and more
uuugggghhh its so true that its sad i love this so much
Hi dear , i hope u r well , your poem was fantastic for me
honestly it was lovely and i had the same situation like u , so i can understand your feelings .
my dear friend my name is bahar , i come from iran and i’m muslim .
if u send me the email i’d love to rendition my peoms in English and send you . it’s up to u
be happy always
nice poem..i really love it..i already read it for many times
o this poem reminds me of my ex girl freind
it’s such a beautiful poem*_*
But why should we keep our memories fresh for things have already dead?
Best wishes^ ^
It’s a beautiful poem *_*but i think we shouldnt keep our memories fresh for things already dead.
Best wishes ^^
i love ur poem! it made me remeber all the good and bad times i had with the love of my liffe. who walked out on me. because the girl that he was dating got pragnet. and yes it is his.
i still cry to this very day.
Even if things are over and feel sad its good to write of those experiences as it helps express and understand the situation and ultimately (hopefully) move on from it -many people would relate to this poem
shoooooo sweeeett*******
i must gv 7 stars to dis.
good, was actually very right.
nowadays broken hearts are seen almost in every next turn…
n dis is d most prominent part of love.
thats really good
i really love your poems.i appreciate every words you written her,i hope i can read another poems from you.take care
I like it. Sometimes it’s so much easier to let go…
i like this poem so much i keep reading it thats crazy
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sad and yet not angry, very mature