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When you are Gone…

I miss you when you never left. I miss you when you are here. My heart beats faster when I hear your name. I feel I have lost everything when you are gone. When you say “I love you,” I stop breathing. I don’t believe how strong your love is on my heart, my brain, my feelings, my dreams. When you tell me you love me, I believe you. When you tell me give me your hand, I give it to you. When I cry, you wrap your arms and body around me. You keep me from falling apart in your arms. When you let go my body falls apart. When you are mad my body hurts. It hurts to breath, cry, talk and all I can do is tell you “I love you.” I tell you I love you, you say you love me more. I say I can’t live with out you, you say you would die if I left you. I tell you I would, could never leave you…

You say to me…
I love you more than you know.
I can’t live without you.
If you left me I would die.
I love you to the moon and back.

by A. E. Snyder

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1 jeni May 10, 2009 at 4:25 PM

love it..!!!

^_^

relates to me…O_o

2 danni May 10, 2009 at 6:05 PM

awhh :) thats reaally sweet. and i can totally relate, i’ve felt that wayy. once upon a time ago.. </3

3 Alex May 11, 2009 at 5:01 AM

i feel that way right now not knowing what to do with mine though lmao but yeah it is really sweet arw xx

4 eva May 11, 2009 at 4:23 PM

thats an awesome poem…
its so real…

5 Shantelle Thompson May 13, 2009 at 10:34 AM

This poem is good I love it

6 chelsea woods June 11, 2009 at 8:56 PM

that reminds me of my boy who live sin ontario an di live in BC he left last summer, and we are still inlove.
ooh my i love it :)

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