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WHAT I DIDN’T KNEW WHAT YOU MEANT

Living in a regret of not knowing what’s true

Feeling the threat to be left alone by everyone

Chocking on my  breath my blood flowing feel I die

Now the time has left there is nothing to survive

I looked for the shine then I looked for the light

In all this I turn my soul blind

When I was all broken that she don’t care

What  I didn’t saw that you were always there

All the lies in my head are crushed

Like a rain settle down the dust

What I didn’t knew , what you meant..

Living like a liar when he wanted the truth it was gone

Feeling like a tears of the eyes that cry to be left alone

Cant even find my reflection in the mirror

Cant even close my eyes ashamed to be myself now

Decided to fight ,decided to triumph

Never accepted what was mine

The weight of loneliness is now tearing me apart

Don’t know how long can I carry my broken heart

When I was all broken that she don’t care

What did I didn’t see that you were always there

All the lies in my head are crushed

Like a rain settle down the dust

What I didn’t knew , what you meant..

By TAZZ
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1 KK March 9, 2010 at 6:22 PM

As your devoted fan I say lovely poem (as alway) and plus 5 stars to you!!! I can really relate to this poem…when I read this I feel like I’m actually within the poem reliving everything that happened with him again. As Richard Bach once said “The worst lies are the lies we tell ourselves. We live in denial of what we do, even what we think. We do this because we’re afraid. We fear we will not find love, and when we find it we fear we’ll lose it. We fear that if we do not have love we will be unhappy.” :)

2 brittany March 10, 2010 at 6:09 PM

this was very good.
you really took your heart and smeared it into an amazing poem.
props.
:)

3 michel11 March 11, 2010 at 3:12 AM

nice stuff …keep posting .

4 shilratna March 12, 2010 at 5:42 AM

Hey tht’s great
i thnk it shud b written for me.
never thnk that someone is wrong,
but always check taht …..r we doing some thng wrong

5 Hiza M March 24, 2010 at 7:50 PM

I. Am. In love with this poem! This is wonderfully written! Be proud of it!

6 Koolz March 30, 2010 at 1:48 PM

A very nice poem

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