How would you like to walk in the rain,
On a dark and cloudy night,
When all that lies around you
Seem not to be in sight.
The business of the day dies away
In the night of dark mist
And unwelcome fright.
The singing of the birds,
The howling of the wind
The fragrance once captured entwines itself and spins,
All that can be heard, seen and sensed
Have journed through the night
And raptured itself out of sight.
by Amela Amson
Message from the author: This is the first poem I have written,and one of my favorites. I do welcome your feedback. Thank You.
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its so mysterious and beautiful. I wish I could right like this
,you know what, i do love writing, especially novels, but sometimes i’m trying to write some poems, and gladly i have made, i like your poem cause it tells how beautiful the earth was…i hope you can write for me sometimes,
love reading your poem,it expresses mind.
love this, and it so happens that a friend and I were writing a novel called Walking in the Rain… this poem actually fits with the story, too… haha.
Keep writing, you’re great
The poem is very beautiful and it touched my heart and I’m thinking how you got inspired. I wish I could write a poem like that but nothing comes to mind. I hope you can tell me how you got inspired. The poem was truly amazing, you have a gift and be sure to use it well. Take care, inspire other people to be Inspirational just like you.
Wow! I love this! Title captured me……….I would love to know what inspired you to write it-don’t stop writing these…………
wow……………that poem is like so ture! i love it so much!i wrote something like this before but i did not post it cause i did not know if ppl would like it or not so its in my book of poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yeah boyee
I just want my fans to know that my real name is Pamela Williamson, but I use the last five letters of my first name and the last four of my last name as my writer’s name. I thank u all so much for sparing the time to read my poems and thanks for ur comments they are greatly appreciated.Thanks again and mat God bles u all. My inspirration comes from just about anything, but God gave me the gift.
I’m not able to write as much as i would like to right now, as I am now in College, but as soon as I’m able to, u will be hearing from me .
interesting poem