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Waiting…

Do you enjoy it? Is it fun?
The way you do it…
You keep me here…
Waiting all night…

Waiting for your voice…
Your comfort…
Your warmth…
Why do you make me feel this way?

Why do I love you?
Why do you tease me so?
Why won’t you speak to me?
Why do you keep me waiting…

by Shakira Van-Pinna
Message from the author: I wrote this because of a certain boy in my life that loves to keep me waiting.

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1 KK May 19, 2009 at 4:16 PM

Ha I know just how you feel. My gosh I’m not even going to begin the story because it still confuses me today. It was not only waiting with this guy for me but also mixed singles, confusion, too much info, etc. Boys are just so strange. Hang in there girlie. Good Poem. :D

2 jamie May 20, 2009 at 1:42 PM

it was a good poem you should write more!

3 Mira May 26, 2009 at 2:46 AM

i like it
its short but sweet
and so true :)

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