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I saw you walking
A sad being
I tried to reach out to you only to have you shy away
I called your name and showed you love
To get in return a cold hard stare
I opened up to you only to have you slam my haert into a million pieces
I cried when you did only to see you hurt more
I see you walking a creature so dark so alone
For you I will smile for you I will love
I shall bring you to the light
To embrace you with care and love
For you my friend I shall never give up…

by Shelby Moit

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1 LuvAddictXxX July 13, 2009 at 2:36 AM

Wonderful and yet so noble. Keep up the good work. Too bad in real life people give up so easily =]

2 TAZZ July 12, 2010 at 2:19 AM

a real beauty …i love it ./.

3 yazyHopesso July 14, 2010 at 12:40 PM

i love this poem

4 dipakji July 18, 2010 at 1:31 PM

Please continue your loving spirit. Wonderful. DIPAK MUKHOPADHYAY.

5 Aaron July 18, 2010 at 4:35 PM

You’re my idol.

6 te-32 July 18, 2010 at 4:45 PM

That was a great poem, thank u 4 sharing

7 diana A August 13, 2010 at 1:36 AM

beautiful

8 Suzy September 4, 2010 at 8:43 AM

Wonderful

9 maa September 7, 2010 at 3:07 AM

YOU HAVE A TALENT!
YOU ARE BLESSED…

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