Unable to speak
Unable to feel
Unable to determine what is fake and real
Unable to trust ever again
Unable to make any friends
Unable to make my family happy again
I have no emotion as I lie here
A cold and heartless monster lurks near
She told me I needed to build a bridge
Cross and get over it, you bitch!
But I am unable to cross that bridge
For I am unable to let the past be
Unable to cry myself to sleep
For this hole I’ve dug is far too deep
Pray to God, to end it soon
Shush little girl it will end soon
Shush little girl it will end soon…
Note From Author: I know this isn’t very good and pretty raw…but I just really need to get out some emotions and share them.
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An excellent piece! Just what i am feeling right now…. Yes, it will end soon…i know it will…
It is very good I like it, keep it up, I know how you feel…
nice, but with re-organization of the same it would flow far much more better. quite creative good.
I LIKED IT 5 STARS
THIS IS A GREAT POEM… PEOPLE KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN IT HIT HARD
i feel the same i know what your going through!
Es Muy Bueno!!
Very good.I feel the same way.I give it *****
Yes very good
every one think this way ..nice lines to express your feeling…exactly what is expected from you …
thank god poemsonly is working again ..
that was the best poem yet you can make a song out of that……..lol
boring!!!!!!!!!!!
I have taken a intrest in your writings, and I have become extremly jelouse of the talent you hold. I wish nothing more then to write like you, from the heart. I do try my hardest… But I still seem to fail. But I only 13, soo I have room to grow. If you read this and if I can figure out how the heck to get mt poetry on here I’ed be more then honnored to have advice from some as insperational as you.
nice piece….
it captured my attention….
i can relate with it….
Wow this is really emotional and captivating, the feelings of mistrust and the discomfort of finding yourself in the middle of misplaced truths….that’s what the poem meant to me - but as with all poems it can mean many different things to many different people
luh-v it
exactly wat i’m feeling write now
i’m goin 2 a new skl & can’t make a lot of new friends plus my family life sucks i sure hope it’ll b over soon
five stars
i love this one great job
This one has many feelings to it, and I like to let you know that this is a great poem, you did very well.
I’m really sorry if I’m wrong but I’m also really sorry if I’m right, because accepting it is hard. But is this poem about….well…..like about you being raped possibly? Because my friend was and she felt EXACTLY like this. I really apologize if this question was out of order or in any possible way rude.
To sg: No it’s ok your not being rude. No this poem is not about being raped. Honestly when I wrote it I was just writting how I felt…but thinking about it, it might have to do with a certain event that happened at school….hmmmm :/
Emotional x
i like…