I’m trying but I just can’t do it
you love me but you can’t prove it
but I wont let move on
because my feelings are still strong
I still believe
that you’ll come back to me
so I keep hoping and praying
writing you this letter
hoping thing with us they get better
but I guess I’m wanting the best
and you are none the less
but in my eyes your wrong
and their hoping I keep you gone
but I want you back home
you put a smile on my face
whenever you say my name
or when your a messages come in
when I press send
I wish you could see
the thoughts in my head
because if there’s one thing I know
it’s you I can’t forget
by ShanesGurl
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I like this poem, keep the good work.
Fab poem! i just wish that i could write poems like this.
wow this is good and i luv writing poems kinda like this but a different style soo grreat job
I write and sing and let me just say that i feel you and the words
in that poem because i’m going through well i went through the
same thing but the feeling is so heavy how is it they can be that one
thing we love to hate and hate to forget. I love your poem its potent
you go gurl
God! That’s exactly how I feel to. Lovely poem!
NICE OUTPUT OF REAL EMOTION
Ur feelings through words hit the spot!