Many times the ones we trust most are the ones who hurt us the most.
When trust is gone there is nothing left just a sad and painful mess.
That’s a lesson I learned so hard from all the god-forsaken things you have done.
I had your back; you had my soul and beat it till my blemished lips mouthed nothing but a loathing groan.
I never thought you destroy me so; you played with my emotions and snapped them like pencil
Not even to cry or give a care just took my mind damned it bare.
You try to turn it all around; put all the blame on me
By reminding me of what we use to be
You say “I had my reasons and I gave you chances” but you killed them all
So you sit there laughing your cursed laugh, as I slowly fall into the deep unknown.
I blame myself for this I guess… for I saw the green flame glowing in your glassy eyes
But I chose to devise for you to help you through the suppose “hell” you go through
I am stronger now and I suppose this is the time where I learn who my real friends are
I think its time I delete it all as I walk down this long dreary hall
Because the old me is gone
And everything this time is said and done
Said and done….
Said and done….
Note From Author: I wrote this poem about my best friend (of 9 years) who has been betraying me for almost that long. Since this year we are no longer friends… and she now torments me.
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Great poem!… being sad about your friend. It sounds like you have been through a lot in your life. I really like the part “You say “I had my reasons and I gave you chances”.
This poem really related to how I felt and continue to feel after I was betrayed by my ex-fiancee. He put through very similar situations and emotions you mention in your poem. I continue to wonder if I will ever be able to love, trust or believe in the beauty of friendship and commitment or if I will always be suspicious, doubtful, cautious and scared of others. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and letting others they are not alone in their despair.
this is agood poem i dont know why yall wont write a comment this is actully pretty
good
Why has no one commented on my poem? Is it that bad
This poem is very deep, sad and touching. Unfortuntately we all have to be knocked down a few times to become stronger. It’s traggic when a friend or someone you love betrays you. Keep in mind “what doesn’t break you makes you”. Love and support, Rene
you know i will never miss to comment on your poems so here it is - as always great , i know how it feels to loose your best friend.
Great poem.it shows betrayal and hurt.i wish others will just be open minded as u did instead of dying in silence.kudos
That’s fantastic and mindblowing…!
wow i know you feel its awful when that happens when your best friend breaks you like that it isnt right and dont worry your not alone many people has had this happen to them
wow this poem describes one of my best friends that hae had since i was six we were like sisters but when we got into year five that was three years down the track of out friendship she started making fun of me and use me and then we became friends again and then she used me again and we almost had this big fight but now we are friends and she has changed and we are in yr 8 now but i have a new best friend and he is all i wished for…
This is so helpful to my spirit
Thank you so much!!!
this is a great peom
that is so true sometimes is hear to trust and trust again. well done
this poem is exactly wat just happened to me never thought it would with this one but it did nd it beautiful
You should read my poem, Forever and a Lifetime, its in the fresh new poems category, I can really relate to this poem in some ways. my best friend and i have been through alot and we fight over stupid things. but i love her to death but one thing she doesnt do is betray me. but this really is a beautiful poem.
Good job i like your poetry
nice friendship
poem
wow…speechless this poem is really well written i really like it…