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Time of situation

Time has passed in no time at all
Some things grew up and something had even fall
Life is changing and keeps on changing
Every day for a new and sometimes challenging

Memories been built up and some to build on
We follow the path with a hope to chase on.
Are we blind or we pretending to be?
Or this is life which it uses to be?

All these things are like mysteries
Puzzles unsolved and creating histories
Carrying the burdens of all our deeds
Finishing this journey asking if someone to lead?

Choking in this air of this anxiety
Leaving all in the hands of almighty
Just thinking for what we are given life for
If it can’t like I am searching for?

by Gurjeet GPS

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1 KK May 26, 2009 at 3:30 PM

Wow this poem is really good. I don’t know how to explain it but I feel this strong and intense connection with this poem. It so real and true.. great!:)

2 Nick May 27, 2009 at 2:28 PM

Excellent poem

3 TAZZ May 28, 2009 at 7:40 AM

nice start.

4 bhaskar kumar deka June 5, 2009 at 1:29 AM

great writting

5 Sandeep January 6, 2010 at 3:37 AM

awesome and can turly move anyone

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