They say to “Live every moment, laugh everyday, love beyond words”
But how can you live every moment when one moment haunts you forever?
How can you laugh everyday when you hurt so badly?
How can you love beyond words when you know you will be beaten down and crushed by the ones you love most?
So ripe out my heart and spare me three words
So I can die deep inside before they hurt me even worse
Spare me the years of heartache and pain
And let me cry myself to sleep tonight
I’ll make it on my own for I can’t make with them
Let the devil purchase my soul
Because the pain he will deliver can’t be worse than the pain right now
So kill me well….oh so well
R.I.P to the devil’s hell
Dedicated to all my friends- this is what you did.
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wow. its kind of a down poem. thats all i have to say, i guess.
omg i love your poem i couldnt aggre with you more!!!
this poem is kinda depressing but its a good poem nonetheless. Love it!
I think Its good
maybe 3 stars
Captured me instantly indicates deep emotion….I totally related to this 4 stars!
this is a good poem it reminds me about my life
very nicely said
i love the 1st 5lines…
great poem
“Live every moment, laugh everyday, love beyond words”
But how can you live every moment when one moment haunts you forever?
——Lines n words to reckon with, really truly liked those lines and words.
sweet. sounds like u have som crappy friends but i felt ur pain.
i dont know—some poems make tears prick the back of my eye—but your note right there at the end really did it!
I loved this, it is the first thing Ive raed in a long time that i can relate to….. well done!!
amazing, couldn’t agree with you more. although… what i am wondering is why it is in the inspirational catogorey? i mean lovely poem but sorta a downer.
awesome poem…….I feel u hav a gr8 pain in ur heart…..
THIS is one of the poems wich touched my heart
I HAVE TO SAY THAT POEM IS TRUE AND HEART BREAKING
true………its heart breaking nd awesome
true ………….just by reading at it i felt a pull of tears in my eyes
all i can say is that youre in a too much pain……
try to make things up, and try to go out to the shell were you have been at the moment….
take a prayer…..
Awe sum …is the only word …….max votes to true to core emotions
You spelled rip out wrong..but other wise i love it its so true for some people at my school…its SOOO going to be my facebook status if you dont mind?
You spelled rip wrong, but other wise awesome poem, its so true for people at my school. This is so going to be my facebook status if you don’t mind?
awesome poem i feel you
wwwooowww… ur so right
Okay, first of all, “How can you laugh everyday when you hurt so badly?”
I’ll tell you, I was beat my whole childhood, not just physically, but mentally. And because of that, I had low self esteem. But, I perservered, and now I wake up every morning with a smile on my face. Im always laughing, and making the most out of life. I love with everything in me, and I DO live every moment. Sure, there are some memories i’d rather forget, but come on, there’s a reason why it’s in your past, not longer existent. Let go of your past issues, and focus soley and the here and now, and I promise, you will be so much happier.
Becky Napier
awsome poem i feel it
sad and hurtful
Is a really deep poem…but hey i know some friends can be a pain in the butt even if one of them can break your heart many of them are manipulaters but still you care enough to be there to love them every day, to give everything youv got so keep being awesome and never let the pain guet to you somehow that you find yourself with no value dont let the pain guet to you becaus it sis your worst enemy.
This is one hell of poem!!!!! I couldn’t believe what I just read! I mean seriously you want to purchase your soul to the devil? I would like to see it~ I salute you!!
im feelin that
*WOW* That was one HELL of a peom!
I mean like it’s really sensative,
it’s like you can feel what is going
on at every moment.
Also great wording,
i like the way you said,
“oh so well R.I.P to
the devil’s Hell.”
i love the poem
This poem relates to me
really good one… your pain can be felt in this poem…….