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The Storm

Bullets of Rain
Shot from the Sky,
Waging war upon the Earth.

The merciless Wind
Slashed like a knife
Cutting down anything in its path.

The roaring Thunder
Pealed with such force,
That the Earth itself shook in fear.

Flashes of Light
Lit up the sky
Like a big neon sign.

The ultimate ruler,
The Storm, rages on,
Till all surrenders.

by Jordonna LaBorde

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1 buttercup March 15, 2010 at 3:15 PM

i LOVE it

2 Transparent March 15, 2010 at 9:36 PM

Oh this is beautiful. I absolutly love the opening lines!!!

3 bebe March 19, 2010 at 8:57 AM

that poem was amazing!! it really made me feel me sumthin that i couldnt feel in a long whie!

4 Louise March 19, 2010 at 6:02 PM

Cleverly written and totally inspiring

5 Julie Kannon March 26, 2010 at 8:14 AM

that is amazzzzing!! I love it!

6 goddess324 April 20, 2010 at 7:08 AM

LOVE IT

7 Sam May 29, 2010 at 8:31 PM

This is awesome. Thank you for sharing!!

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