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The Canvas Maze

The painter is like a mouse in a maze.
The painter stares dauntlessly at the blank canvas
just as the mouse gazes intently into the entrance of the maze,
both sensing the succulent reward at journey’s end.

The mouse and painter begin their adventure,
one through a winding, walled maze
and the other through a convoluted canvas labyrinth,
but neither knowing what lies beyond the next turn.
The mouse’s tail sweeps around each bend,
as the painter’s brush sweeps vibrant colors into existence.
With each step they sense the end of the journey drawing near,
The mouse’s nose begins to twitch with anticipation,
both experience a surge of adrenaline.
Their reward awaits!
Bursting forth from the maze,
the mouse dines on a delicious piece of brie cheese.
Although the mouse dines happily alone,
the painter and all who view his masterpiece dine on it together.

Message from author-I wrote this poem for a metophoric extention (or whatever) in 7th grade English. Thought it was kind of neat. Enjoy my simple minded words haha!

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1 Lisa August 23, 2009 at 9:14 AM

Ver nice poem. The words are used in such away one can visualize the contents in the peom. Keep writing you are a great poet.

2 WILLIAM August 24, 2009 at 3:27 AM

THAT’S VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY GOOD I LOVE IT.

3 Bunker August 24, 2009 at 5:50 AM

Interesting and informative. But will you write about this one more?

4 Marion McKenzie August 24, 2009 at 12:54 PM

I am very impressed with your pattern of thought,
and really enjoyed reading your well-written poem.
Thanks for sharing it!

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