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Sunshine

Sunshine; Wonderful. Charming. Bright it is.
Warm. Loving. Something you don’t want to miss.
Because the sun is very needed, of everything and everyone,
I will say, that you are the bright sunshine of sun.
A lose is hard to live with, especially of a near,
Yet have you lived without the one, who hold you mostly dear.
Yes, you have lived without, and you of all have survived,
Everyone knows that, because you are everyone’s guide.
Sunshine in your hair, sunshine in your eyes,

You are the sunshine of everybody’s lives.
Sunshine in you smile, sunshine in your laughter,
Everyone knows, you’ll live happily ever after.

Dedicated to a very special friend of mine.
She has lost her mother, yet she is the most loving, warm, happy, smiling girl, I know. I love you.

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Rating: 4.5/5 (44 votes cast)

{ 33 comments… read them below or add one }

1 KK August 22, 2009 at 5:41 PM

Aww that is so sweet… I wish I had a friend like that! love the poem so real and pure :D

2 BB August 22, 2009 at 8:13 PM

AWW THATS SO CUTE
MY GIRL WILL LOVE IT

3 joan August 23, 2009 at 6:22 PM

This is the first poem I looked at and it was just what I needed. I too, have a loveing friend who lost his wife and is grieving. it helps.

Thank you

4 fei August 24, 2009 at 9:28 AM

so sweet,so true friendship is the only rose without thorns!!!

5 Malvika August 25, 2009 at 8:35 AM

This poem is amazing, a truly beautiful creation. Keep it up!!!
It is really very touching………….God bless its author………………

6 Ditte Larsen September 4, 2009 at 12:23 PM

LINE! :D
i love you too!
everytime i read this poem, i nearly
begin to cry! :) i thank you for the dedication, and you
must know, that you are one of the most important persons
in my life! you are fantastic. - the very special friend.

7 Anonymous Unicorn September 4, 2009 at 8:44 PM

it sounds so sweet! this girl is a kind-hearted natural.

8 Zeiad Amr September 5, 2009 at 9:15 PM

I love this poems, i needed to my best friend because she’s upset from me :D

9 Analee September 22, 2009 at 12:29 PM

Its a excellence poem, words of encouragement.

10 himanshi singh October 4, 2009 at 5:11 AM

IT’S A FANTASTIC POEM..&..VERY TOUCHING TOO

11 selina hakim October 6, 2009 at 2:29 PM

l like your poem is very nice
thank u
from selina from TANZANIA.
bye

12 bhezt18 October 8, 2009 at 10:08 PM

its a wonderful poems for someone that you love…

13 lola October 25, 2009 at 1:21 PM

its very touching.kip it up. Kudosssssssssss!!!!!!

14 rawda November 17, 2009 at 7:16 PM

i luv poems and i luved this one

15 Zeth November 21, 2009 at 12:34 PM

hey good poem but little spelling correction…loss instead of lose when you first read it it doesnt make sense other than that good poem sorry just FYI

16 ruth December 9, 2009 at 5:30 PM

i think that you must love your friend so much and by the way you are talking it shows that you care about her alot even her family and i encourage you to keep on doing it.

17 lacresha December 10, 2009 at 7:16 PM

i feel Zeth is rude
leave the poet be
they wrote it as a getaway from the world
so stop hateing and celebrate their courage
just for your FYI

18 bob lewis December 10, 2009 at 7:27 PM

:) zeth marry me

19 aimee December 15, 2009 at 10:48 AM

OMG I LOVE THIS POEMS . I LOOOOVEEE POETRY . I WRITE IT EVERYDAY EVERY TIME I G ET DUMPED BY A BOYFRIEND . THATS LIKE 10000 TIMES. (: I LOVE BOYS , POETRY AND TACOS.

20 Whatever You Say~~~ December 24, 2009 at 4:42 PM

That was a very beautiful poem… It was so sad and calm… I loved it:)

<33Cassie4eva:)

21 stuped December 30, 2009 at 9:07 PM

i am not crying wa wa wa wa wa wa

22 Lavender January 8, 2010 at 6:52 PM

ah duuuudee i likes this poem it’s like awesome :) :( :* :p xp B) [:|]

23 Lavender January 8, 2010 at 6:54 PM

;) :) ;) :) :( :) :( ;)heeeeeeeheeeeeeeeheeeeeeee……………………

24 chelsea leigh January 11, 2010 at 1:38 PM

hello. i love this poem. it reminded me of me. i didnt really lose my mom but when my parents split up i felt like i lost her. anyway to get to the real point of why im writing. hopefully someone will read and give me the info i need. i am at school where they have mostly everything blocked. i was hopeing for anyone who has proxies that work to get through firewalls, specifically for facebook, i would greatly appreciate it. thank you.

25 Jesseca January 14, 2010 at 11:40 PM

I cried when I read it, and I didn’t know entirely what it was about.
I lost someone very close to me, and he used to call me sunshine, so it hit me pretty hard, but I love it.

26 Quita January 29, 2010 at 9:05 PM

Wow thiSz poem iSz so sweet. like daht showSz yhu are such a great friend. but i love the poem.

27 Shebna January 30, 2010 at 12:33 AM

Wow its awesome. Same happened to me but this time the girl :)

28 Shebna January 30, 2010 at 12:33 AM

hates it

29 Kelsey Marie Baybee February 5, 2010 at 10:08 AM

awwww dhat wus so sweet!* : )

30 Kelsey Marie Baybee February 5, 2010 at 10:09 AM

honey dha qurl dhat commented above meh is jux; hating because she can’t write good poems lyke yhu can.!* So dnt pay her any attention!*

31 Kelsey Marie Baybee February 5, 2010 at 10:10 AM

:)

32 Kelsey Marie Baybee February 5, 2010 at 10:10 AM

;)

33 Hayley March 6, 2010 at 10:59 AM

aaaawwwwwww i love this poem!!!!!!!

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