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Someday

I sit waiting for what seems like forever
Waiting till the day we will be together

I look all around for any sign of you
Not seeing one I am unsure what to do

I hope to spend many days with you before I die
Not seeing any days in sight I double over and cry

My mind wonders while I lay in wait
Thinking that we meeting had to be fate

These feelings to me that once felt foreign
I now know mean I love you Lauren

I love you with all that I am
I know deep down that this is no sham

I know you are my one true love
You are the only one I will ever be thinking of

That I will love you forever I hereby decree
To my heart you alone hold the key

On my knees I prey
That we will be together someday

by Nick
Message from the author: Another poem I wrote for my girlfriend, but have not showed her yet

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{ 12 comments… read them below or add one }

1 lindsi May 26, 2009 at 4:50 PM

that is the cutest little poem ever omg that was adorable

2 shakeya May 27, 2009 at 6:45 AM

wow thats a very good peom im going thorough the same thing my bf wont call me and i wait to see his face even though hes not coming

3 GPS May 27, 2009 at 8:15 AM

well done….
this is really romantic…..

4 Nick May 27, 2009 at 3:22 PM

Thank you, I’m glad you like it

5 tasha May 29, 2009 at 12:22 AM

that wuz so damn kute..
-natasha

6 Allison Gruver May 31, 2009 at 9:18 PM

thats was a good poems considering the fact that im going through some problems with my bf. i wish he would change.. i love the poem it kinda stands out.

7 Sharon Tulley June 4, 2009 at 12:31 PM

This kind of reminds me of some lines from a poem I wrote once long ago.. it goes.. “Oh, my love is in another place… far away from me.. somehow I know he’s waiting… waiting…. just like me…”

Good read! Thanks for posting this!

8 Katy... June 5, 2009 at 5:24 PM

i really like this poem…. thanks 4 sharing

9 Jess June 8, 2009 at 12:09 AM

I love this poem ….
it’s so cute

10 xia mae manansala June 30, 2009 at 6:57 AM

hayah ang ganda naman nitong poem na to sana mabigay ko to sa ex ko noh.. mahal ko pa rin sya kaso mas kailangan namn ako ng bestfriend ko ngaun di bale na lang basta maganda kep it up

11 Natali July 16, 2009 at 10:42 AM

I really loved it! :-)

12 eumir September 3, 2009 at 10:06 AM

good job bro.. :)

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