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Reality

If you need a place, in this reality
Just to be yourself, while everything seems awfully
To cry, to scream, to relief your heart
When you feel your world is falling apart
I will be right here, to wait and hope
And I will gently remove the rope
Which lies and tightens around your neck
Pull you away, and of course I’ll check
The light in your eyes is fading away
Turning black, turning cold, clearly with dismay
Your heart feels far away, gone to disappear
I want you to stay, I want you near
I smile at you, and try to remember
What it was like, no need to go further
Loneliness and sadness passing by
Hand in hand, with tears in the eye
Drowning in words, unnecessary pain
No need to describe, no need to complain
Your eyes are open, lightning once more
Watching, sparkling, just like before
I’ll hold you in my arms, hold you tight
Tell you, that we, together, have won this fight

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Rating: 4.5/5 (181 votes cast)

Tagged as: Line Kjergaard

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1 RAM KRISHNA December 26, 2009 at 2:26 AM: A loving poem.
2 dreamgirl December 27, 2009 at 1:24 PM: I like your poem…Very touching
3 kadu December 31, 2009 at 4:51 AM: its deep .. its touching
4 Michelle January 12, 2010 at 2:02 AM: Wow. This poem is so fantastic. It made me tear up. I really enjoyed reading it. Good Job.
5 ashley January 12, 2010 at 12:42 PM: this is a very beautiful peom i love it very much.
6 hayley January 19, 2010 at 9:03 AM: i luv this poem alot i think it is the best 1 i have red so far
7 Sarahi January 20, 2010 at 12:05 PM: beautiful poem!!!!
good description of reality
i loved it a lot……
<3
8 maui alcalde January 23, 2010 at 9:10 PM: wow…it’z great…..perfect 100% i like it..i luv reading poems..an ur poem is d’best……jejeje..keep it up
9 Lushhh January 25, 2010 at 12:16 PM: Beaut that was adorable. congrats! i loved it!
xx
10 shay January 27, 2010 at 10:18 AM: i feel like i have lived this poem i relly love it!!!
11 krissy January 31, 2010 at 5:45 PM: this is soo cute
12 keekee February 2, 2010 at 2:24 PM: This pOem iS sO swEEt…kEEp up dA hArd wOrk!!!!!!
13 omar February 5, 2010 at 11:25 AM: true sick poem.. in a good way
14 Sjur Herman Zeiner-Gundersen February 6, 2010 at 6:20 PM: Beautiful
15 Martin February 6, 2010 at 11:01 PM: An amazing mind wrote this poem its deep, passionate, and i so relate to REALITY!
16 vickie topas February 8, 2010 at 11:23 AM: deep in thought and very unselfish. it sounds like she has had some troubled expriences in her life, and that y ou are aware enough to show her how to make some negatves into positievs. farout keep the words true to your heart and you will help many people find their true reality

ya! ya! ya!
17 katy February 11, 2010 at 12:43 PM: LOVE THE POEM 5 STARS FOR MEE
AND A SMILE BECAUSE IT WAS GREAT
18 blondie :) February 14, 2010 at 2:14 PM: thats so cool and awesum
19 emily louise heeks February 15, 2010 at 4:54 AM: whoah! a.w.e.s.o.m.e.
20 ashutosh February 28, 2010 at 4:56 PM: i thank to god for giving me chance to read the beautiful poem.
21 kirA March 1, 2010 at 6:42 AM: niCE onE! sO deEp!! rEaLLy awEsOme!! ^^
22 patrick March 18, 2010 at 7:56 PM: i sent this poem to a friend, because she needed to have her spirit lifted up. this is a great poem, that everyone should read.
23 frencheska March 25, 2010 at 11:46 AM: nice it made my day very deep poem n yea it is reality i wonder wen everyone is gunna find dis out
24 rayal April 2, 2010 at 12:37 PM: this poem is fantastico
25 Sarah Parkk(: April 19, 2010 at 3:03 PM: I love this poem. It really spoke to me.
Out of most poems this might be 100% perfecto.
I am not much of a poetry person myself, but this brung me into the meaning of life & mistakes. Thank you & nice job keep up the good work.
*Snaps*
-Sarah Park- 4.19.10(:

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