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Reality

If you need a place, in this reality
Just to be yourself, while everything seems awfully
To cry, to scream, to relief your heart
When you feel your world is falling apart
I will be right here, to wait and hope
And I will gently remove the rope
Which lies and tightens around your neck
Pull you away, and of course I’ll check
The light in your eyes is fading away
Turning black, turning cold, clearly with dismay
Your heart feels far away, gone to disappear
I want you to stay, I want you near
I smile at you, and try to remember
What it was like, no need to go further
Loneliness and sadness passing by
Hand in hand, with tears in the eye
Drowning in words, unnecessary pain
No need to describe, no need to complain
Your eyes are open, lightning once more
Watching, sparkling, just like before
I’ll hold you in my arms, hold you tight
Tell you, that we, together, have won this fight

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Rating: 4.5/5 (67 votes cast)

{ 21 comments… read them below or add one }

1 TAZZ September 1, 2009 at 7:37 AM

great i love that , very gentle poem with a very good rhyme.

2 susu September 4, 2009 at 5:08 AM

great poem i like it alot <3

3 rocky September 4, 2009 at 5:37 AM

is so true!!! nice

4 hii September 4, 2009 at 8:32 AM

i love this poem it is great

5 Anonymous Unicorn September 4, 2009 at 8:40 PM

wow, this is awesome! all of my poems are like sad and angry. this is so sweet and loving

6 Mutale September 5, 2009 at 11:11 PM

Very nice poem. Interesting couplets.

7 pquickfall September 8, 2009 at 6:05 AM

i love you

8 hazem02 September 11, 2009 at 11:35 PM

the scene is nice..love relates the beauty of nature..

9 Shannon K. September 14, 2009 at 4:48 PM

I love this poem its beautiful and real.

10 carmelita September 15, 2009 at 4:10 AM

wow its awesome..its very inspirational with people and i know if someone read this poem they can be more stong to face the reality…

11 Christinah September 15, 2009 at 7:56 AM

Great! poem I like it.

12 Jessica Anderson September 15, 2009 at 7:59 PM

It is so gentle and touching.
It makes you want to share it with someone
It is beautiful!

13 awriterstouch September 17, 2009 at 10:06 AM

wow all I can do is this :) what a blessing awesome

14 laluna1978 September 19, 2009 at 8:54 PM

That’s a good poems.

15 Aaleyah September 22, 2009 at 5:01 AM

Omg Dis Poem Explains Alot To Me , i Been Threw Alot So I Would Be Able To Relate To It alot , But Its A Very beautiful pOem & i Love So Much

16 Ely September 22, 2009 at 12:39 PM

love this one, good one

17 Katie September 24, 2009 at 4:47 PM

Very good. Gentel and ful of sadness and yet its still so true…

18 Katie September 24, 2009 at 5:43 PM

Its sweet. I like it alot

19 goal is lago October 2, 2009 at 8:03 PM

fine write and inclreases the will of any person.

20 CT October 3, 2009 at 11:18 AM

I really enjoyed it

21 CT October 3, 2009 at 11:23 AM

It was touching

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