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Our Love Will Always Be

I tried to hard today
and fell among the many pieces of my heart.
Broken and scattered over the months since you’ve left.
I long for your touch
Your Kiss
Your cool embrace
but most of all just for you.
Just to hear you say the sound of my name in your velvet tone.
For you I’ve cried myself to sleep.
For you I’ve stayed up waiting at night.
You told me I’d forget
but I haven’t and never will.
This state of numbness has disappeared
and now I stand alone and afraid.
For once in my life I have experienced the pain of loss.
We were meant to be
and it will always be that way.
Our soles
Our hearts
Our minds
will always be one.

Our love will always be.
by Kaity Bartolo
Message from the author: This is one of my New Moon inspired poems. It is also for my novel.

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Rating: 4.4/5 (7 votes cast)

{ 7 comments… read them below or add one }

1 lenide benacin June 3, 2009 at 2:36 PM

that poem make me happy every single moment i read it.

2 Sharon Tulley June 3, 2009 at 6:58 PM

some things… are meant to be… whether now… in dreams… or in a future… somewhere in time…

I like this poem!

3 jimbob June 4, 2009 at 12:50 PM

good poem i love it

4 Amber June 7, 2009 at 7:32 PM

Thats a great job!!!!! :)

5 kamal dhaliwal August 14, 2009 at 4:17 AM

awesome poem…..one who has ever faced the pain of losing somebody will feel this poem hitting his heart…….!!!!!!!!

6 Wayne Haskett September 6, 2009 at 5:05 AM

Now that’s poetry! I really envy for such wisdom!!!!!!!
Showing your losses sometimes lets someone share your burdened
emotions. Just keep up the great work and you know sometime that the
pain was His way, the Lord of Heaven, to help you grow, in His will!!!
The Love of the Father be with U.

7 Wayne December 11, 2009 at 12:08 PM

I have read this poem, I really, really, love this poem! I am sorry about
the pain. I am more sorry about the 1st response, comment, it may have
seemed cold, but it was the best thing I could write at that time. That poem is excellent.

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