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Our Love is a Solid Love

The fast tempo of my pulse is all I can hear.
The breaths I take fill the immense emptiness of my chest.
My love for you is frozen here waiting
Waiting for you to come and melt it
Because when you walk in the room, I will explode.
Explode with tears
Explode with cheer
Explode with fear.
Fear that you might leave someday.
Fear that you might get hurt, by me.
Fear that my love isn’t enough for someone as beautiful as you.
Love is all powerful
Love is compassion
Love is forever.
Forever is all that we have.
For when the lion fell in love with the lamb, time and space and every meaning in life dissolved and reshaped itself.
Our love is a solid love, a love that can not be abolished.

by Kaity Bartolo
Message from the author: This is a tribute to New Moon, written by Bella. Also for my Novel Forever Love.

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1 Sharon Tulley June 2, 2009 at 2:08 PM

I do like your poems that I’ve read. Keep posting!

2 Georgie June 6, 2009 at 8:17 PM

Awesome poem! Keep writing.

3 nonie June 7, 2009 at 9:43 AM

wow…..fantastic poem..i remember my habeebe how i wish we are like that. really i like the poem.

4 Nickie February 9, 2010 at 12:50 PM

I really like this poem it seems like it’s very personal to someone!

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