In my perfect little world, people greet,
they kiss and hug each time they meet.
Friends hold hands, and calm your fears;
they stick around to wipe your tears.
But in the world today, we just don’t care,
and showing love is somewhat rare.
When times are fun all friends are near,
then things get tough and most disappear.
In my perfect little world, we give and share;
we make it a point, to show we care.
We live to love, and love to live,
and find it easy to forgive.
But in the world today we strive on greed,
and crave the things we rarely need.
We step on others to get our way,
and hurt with what we do or say.
In my perfect little world, children smile,
and parents go that extra mile.
No child is ever harmed or hurt,
abused or treated just like dirt.
But in the world today most people cry,
and only pray in case they die.
We’ve given in to all that’s bad,
and then complain that life is hard.
In my perfect little world were all the same
and life is not a spiteful game.
People are loyal, honest and just,
and value the gift of friendship and trust.
But in the world today it seems,
we’ve lost all hope or goals and dreams.
Malicious acts are seen as witty,
I think it’s sad and such a pity.
by Gabrielle Llambias 09
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OMG i love this poem!! really well written!!!!
so truuueee every single word!!!
loved itt A***
wow! i love your poem..it really touched me, and i love it!!!!!!!
Excellent! I didn’t know my neighbour was so bright
Well done!
really really nice poem every single word is so true!!! 5 star *****
( and not just beacuse paula told me too hehe)
What a superb poem! Really a gem! Clear about people’s problem, A real lesson to all of them.
OMG OMG HOW AMAZING THIS POEM IS
ITS REALLY TRUE SO SO SOO TRUE…:)
Nice one!
very well written and its so true
this is amazing.
dam this poem is real connect to real life
wowwww this poem is amazingg!! i totally relate to it!!!
pleasee post some more
thankyou very much for all your nice comments
ive posted a few more ( see new poems section)
Gabrielle, your poems are wonderful. I read them all. If anyone wants to read more of Gabrielle’s poems see this link: Gabrielle Llambias
OMG!!!! lol i cant believe u can rhythm so well and make it all make sense….WOW! thats all i have to say…
There is no perfection in this life…. if there are angelic people… they may very well have a broken wing… but as the Martina McBride song goes.. even with a broken wing.. someone can still sing… sometimes the song is sad and sometimes tears come for a reason. To each and every area of life… there is a time andd season. But those are just some thoughts on my mind after reading this….
This was well written.. thank you for posting it.. keep writing and posting please!
I LOVE IT …….ITS TRUTHFUL…..KEEP ON WRITTING!!!
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So true. :/
sad, but very true.
Excellentt poem.
Are you a prfessional??
this is such a good poem…i love it..soo true..crazy world we have, i wish it wasn’t so bad..
yu seem tu grasp everyfing dat shuld happen in dis world but rarely do + d bad fings dat are seen as NORMAL now in dis world ! dis is a REALLY gd poem ! x
amazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzing poem………………it really touches d heart…………………….
Wonderful! Just, perfect.
You are a great writer. Love all of your works.
You’re poem is one of the best I have ever read! It is so realistic, unfortunately, if only this world would change.
we would be better of if this world was like your perfect little world. Nice poem
OH MY GOD!!!!!! THIS POEM WAS AMAZING!!!! IT SHOULD BE PUBLISHED SOMEWHERE I DONT KNOW WHERE BUT IT SHOULD… it almost made me cry literally
please thanks for warnderfull poem.becouse you really seen what is on poeple’s heart. just keep on like that. thanks alot
Thank you all for your nice comments
god blessxxx
gabs
I just got out of a long term relationship and it this realy touched me thank you for sharing.
Ron Garcia
Your poem is very true and realistic. You also touch and catch my feelings when I read this poem. Thank you so much for sharing. May God always bless you.
Love, Joanna
this is the best poem i’ve read so far. you did a really good job and it is soo tru about the world today.
nice i wish i had a little perfect world good work
veryy beautifulll…….keep it up!
2oo gud..kp up d wrk..
whOa… how’d u do that??? i’m also a writer in our school… but this one is very wonderful…. hope that people wud change…. and make evrything back to the old times… like your perfect little world…
use your talent to glorify GOD…..
god bLess….
You are the type of person that should run for president! You have what most have for gotten..you have love in your heart and a smile on your face. You beleive this world can be a better place! You could really make a difference in this world today! I admire you a lot
president!! hehehehe..thats sooo funny. thx …thank you all for your positive comments ..god blessxx
ahMmm
i lOve yOur pOem
every line was sO expressive,
meaningful and real
keep it up.!!!
i will look foRward for mOre pOems from you
=)
Stunning poem. It’s sentiments and message is truly thought-provoking. Well done.
This poem is SO true and SO meaningful and every person on the planet needs to read this!!! Lol great job and don’t stop writing.
What a beautiful poem and so true. I, too, in my perfect world feel the same that you do, but alas, unless something changes in this world today and unless we let go and let God…we are doomed, I believe…but in OUR perfect world…it is nice. Thank you for that poem.
Sharon
Bravoo !!!!!!!!!. hope ma people in kenya will read it.Wauu!
that is a great poem. it should be put in a book.
Magnificent! It’s sumptuous. And it’s rightful ^_^
This was very good!
So good, appreciate you sharing this!
I love it