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My Moon

You just look at the stars the stars will shy
They want to give you the blanket of sky
You make the moon feel so jealous
Because you are like the same walking down on earth
where everyone can see you, everyone can touch you
and now, no one will want to look above

by TAZZ

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1 kwoods May 17, 2009 at 11:50 AM

Beautiful…Not perfect but hey who is? Maybe try to focus more on the person…Other than that its great! Keep working!

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