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My love untold

How will I tell you,about what I feel,
about a wound that over months wont heal,
the pain of which makes my heart to reel,
everyday, every night, I fight a losing battle,

against wishes that my heart likes to cradle,
no matter how well I use my brains insight,
cant subdue thoughts that my heart feels right,
I can very well kill in my memory,

the thoughts about infatuations with many,
but never in my mind can I ever erase,
the divinity that reflects from your face,
how much I love you, you will never know,

this feeling for you, I will dare not show,
I so loathe the way my fate has to be,
because you love someone and its not me,
my mind forbids but I accept it wholeheartedly,

there is nothing I wish for than to see you happy,
from my voice you will never hear,
the calls of my soul to have you near,
in my eyes you will never see,

the pain of my heart that fails to cease,
from my actions you will never learn,
deep within, the love for you that endlessly burns.

by Christo Michael

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{ 22 comments… read them below or add one }

1 steffy May 20, 2009 at 2:38 AM

amazing . . u r on d process f bcomng a grt poet 1 day

2 rose ukken May 20, 2009 at 10:52 AM

:-) :-) :-) :-)

3 care bear May 20, 2009 at 11:34 AM

love this poem!!!

4 Lali May 20, 2009 at 1:00 PM

I love this, great work, keep on with da good work.

5 caroline May 21, 2009 at 2:48 AM

really good…well expressed

6 Jessica Boyd May 21, 2009 at 12:00 PM

Wow. . . Your poem left me speechless. This brings back memories of past loves that I have experienced and the feeling was not mutual. Your poem would have been perfect for me to show him just to express the way I felt. Great, Great job. I hope to see more from you.

7 tazz May 22, 2009 at 7:31 AM

great poem

8 Nithish May 24, 2009 at 12:46 AM

Gud one..but one suggestion, can’t you choose a more ‘feel good’ subject?

9 john joy May 24, 2009 at 9:48 AM

cool bro,good one,,,,

10 Christina Adriana May 24, 2009 at 11:44 PM

perfect…

11 Kristen McKinney May 25, 2009 at 7:02 PM

I love this!!! One word, AMAZING!

12 janet May 27, 2009 at 10:45 AM

Hey, you are so amazing, I love the way write, good job.

13 sharhislove May 29, 2009 at 8:13 PM

I have thoughts like this myself… someone is in my life… who talks to me so sweetly and as far as I know this new person who is pursuing me.. he’s free to pursue me… and yet… my heart has a mind of it’s own… toward places where no freedom is.

14 Jasmine June 7, 2009 at 12:20 PM

i love this poem its so good i just love it!

15 Jamie Stephens June 8, 2009 at 9:12 PM

i love you done a very very very AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

16 shrushti June 10, 2009 at 3:50 AM

all i cn say is awesum job!!!!!!

17 janet June 10, 2009 at 10:06 PM

You are awsome!!! I love it, good flow to it. You are a great poet.

18 Felicia Adams June 11, 2009 at 12:01 AM

This poem hit me where it hurts..Thank you

19 ayesha June 12, 2009 at 1:00 PM

ultimate work…

20 Marian June 22, 2009 at 4:18 AM

nice poem
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21 J.loeto August 3, 2009 at 6:28 AM

God it is amazing how gifted u r, how do u manage to lay feelings into the physical worl just like that…great work.

22 Adz September 26, 2009 at 11:28 AM

Hey ..wt u pend down was gud..hop it aint smtn tht u wnt throug…bt smtn tht jus came up..as a thot..

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