I got lost in an embrace and adrenaline of being thrust in love
A love so great that goes beyond reality as so it seemed
I got lost in a promise that seemed so truthful at the time
It was like a hurricane so wild, it swallowed me whole
When I thought love was all that mattered
It made everything else not matter to me anymore
I stayed in the frosty winter weather in your crystal heart for far too long
To find the hidden poison skull within this love
When I found the golden key it was too late to be free
The force had taken over me
I could no longer control myself
I was your puppet
My movements were predetermined
I kept trying and trying to break out of the this cage
Until one day the heart that beat one, beat two again
I know though spring may alter my common sense
I am the only person who I can trust and be with forever
My heart was broken; if it was my body it would heal one day
But it never will, for it’s my heart that got hurt.
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as always ,very nice .hey i hope you will not mind but i want to ask you something once you said to me that your mom says that “to the world you are somebody and to somebody you are the whole world”,but i was just wondering that how am i suppose to find that somebody.
good like this good job.
I HAVE TO SAY THAT THIS POEMS IS SO,SO,SO TOUCHING IN A WAY THAT WHEN I READ IT I FELT MY HEART SMILING AND THAT NEARLY MADE ME CRY BUT I HELD ON TO MY TEARS COZ I WAS WITH MY FRIENDS WHO WERE ACTUALLY GIRLS
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Splended love it.
This is beautiful could u send this to me
My Heart Got Hurt
I got lost in an embrace and adrenaline of being thrust in love
A love so great that goes beyond reality as so it seemed
I got lost in a promise that seemed so truthful at the time
It was like a hurricane so wild, it swallowed me whole
When I thought love was all that mattered
It made everything else not matter to me anymore
I stayed in the frosty winter weather in your crystal heart for far too long
To find the hidden poison skull within this love
When I found the golden key it was too late to be free
The force had taken over me
I could no longer control myself
I was your puppet
My movements were predetermined
I kept trying and trying to break out of the this cage
Until one day the heart that beat one, beat two again
I know though spring may alter my common sense
I am the only person who I can trust and be with forever
My heart was broken; if it was my body it would heal one day
But it never will, for it’s my heart that got hurt.
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I really liked it! I’m so happy I read this
wow that is so deep the one thing we can’t do is give up because of hurt and all the pain in our life awesome
Thanks guys!!! This is like one of my first love poems
I was hoping people could actually relate to because I wrote this having no experience with love at all. Oh and to answer your question Tazz…. you don’t find that somebody that somebody finds you 
I am guessing that you already have that somebody you’re just not looking hard enough
I REALLY LIKE UR POEMS, ITS SO TOUCHY AND REAL… KEEP IT UP PLZZ
i love this poem it inspires me!! and my life is not the greatest at the time so reading this poem is helping me a lot. when i grow up i want to write poems!!!!
this really a beautiful poem.
good one.
wat a nyc poem, i reali lvd it nd nw ima send it 2ma ex coz she deserve it. TELL ME; THEY SAY GOD IS LOVE, SINCE MY GIRL FRND IS MY LOVE, DUZ DAT MEAN SHES GOD?
Wow! All I can say is that. I have had my heart broken for a few years now. It has been the hardest thing I have ever had to go through so far. I am still trying to mend it. You just sumed it up for me in this poem. Please continue enlighting people with your words. You just did it for me. It has brought out tears that needed to be let out for the heart can only take but so much. Thank you! It was a wonderful way of expression. : )
Beautiful poem:o)
Beautiful i love it from begining to end and so did Nana, Thank i know who i’m sending it too.
wow that was so amazing an it relates to me alot
Hi if you don’t mind…can you please email a couple of your other poems i would love to read them and TAZZ too please. both of you have inspired many people including me
it is one of the sdoothing sorrowful poems
it explores the reality of the irriversible.
I REALLY LOVED THIS ONE GREAT JOB IN WRITTING THESE POEMS IT REALLY GIVES PEOPLE THINGS TO THINK ABOUT I KNOW I DOO…
GOD BLESS YOU ..
this poem just mean alot to me. i can’t explain
This poem is great,i love the imagery and its a reflection of the truth
the poems ‘re real good. if left to me i’ll like to have it in my mail box, especially love & FUN poems.
love your poem!i can actually relate,cant wait for another one!keep up the good work!:)
Wow! thats beautiful
I just broke up with my boyfriend recently. Even though it was mutual, I’m still incredibly hurt and haven’t been able to put the feelings into words. But you did it for me.
Whoever you are,”THANK YOU”….from the bottom of my heart and inside my foolish pride.I was praying for the right words to share with my teenage daughter that I have all but abandoned due to my selfish ways.(THATS A POEM IN ITSELF]??!!…You have taken the very essence of my heart,souland mind…..and put them into words of meaning for me and my daughter…….You may have saved a beautiful future from ruin and a relationship barely holding on…..from desolate ruin.”I KNOW”…You belive…….”GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS”
The writer had me in mind. its so touching.
ye totally feel it its a situtation i was n
ye totally dis reminds me of a situation i was n luv can hurt
luv is like war:
easy to begin
hard to end
never 4get
agh that happened to me once…. =/
well can you read my poetry see if you like them.
i am a beginner at this so please help if you can
haha well they are on fresh new poems and my name is
Jorge Orozco, I am 16 years of age =)
i love this poem!!! i can read it over an over again! its sad but its great.
i like it cox i experience to gut hurt
Thats a lovely poem
Keep on writing x
great poem i love it
OMg. dis POem is sooooo cute. lots of talent you have :]
that is so sad i hope you get better
wow!! i really,really like it!!
hey boss, it’s really a damn good and heart touching poem. i really enjoyed reading it. plz send me a copy of it… mind blowing poem. hat off to you.
i like it….and i felt it…
Hey guess I am flooded with E-mails right now but I will get back to you asap. Thank you for the wonderful comments… you all are such good people.
Your poem “My Heart Got Hurt” is very beautiful and touching. I think everyone who had ever loved will be able to feel it.
Its so true! Its wonderfully produced! Awesome!
cute &cool
hya………… m lovn it…..
awsome….
I can actually really relate to this! It’s a great poem
very nice, absoluately heart felt…it made me wonder how long of a relationship you were inspired by?