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My friend

In a sweating sunny, and a thickens of mud
my love was gone like a crazy lion.
As we say are goodbyes she looked away to say
hello to a newer love

As envious as i was i grab a knife to cut myself,
so i can bleed to death, bleeding so fast like a rain
day comes a sound say you are my life
by the time i turn to see who it was i lost my sight
and faint away

Doctors were shock to see m a life, they had told me a lady had
saved your life wondering on who it could have been,
felt ashamed to live again.

Agonize with fears and betray i was mad to live another day,
until walked a beauty of beast sat next to me by my side, said
to me you are my life. I looked up and said on my heart god is good
because he had sent me an angel and that angel is what i called a friend.

by Intangible Smith

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1 shannon May 19, 2009 at 11:30 AM

can you write me a poem ?

2 shannon May 19, 2009 at 11:31 AM

that was a good poem!!

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