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My Dream Life

I have a dream life,
Its full of bliss.
No guns, no knives,
Just happiness.
With laughs and smiles,
And no delays,
Go on for miles,
No needs to astray.
So as you see,
This is my heaven.
My dreams and me,
Forever since age seven.

by Rachel Samples
Message from the author: Since I was seven, I’ve dreamt about going to a place like this. A place with no pain, no tears, no sorrows, or fears. And i found out that only God can give me a place like that. So this dream life IS heaven.

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1 chris May 7, 2009 at 10:57 AM

good and insparational.

2 nicole May 7, 2009 at 11:26 AM

This was a awesome poem.I love it nice way of writing it.

3 Annie May 7, 2009 at 7:09 PM

i like your poems it is very nice and great inspiration.

4 amela amson May 12, 2009 at 3:20 PM

I like this poem rachel , you sure got it right.

5 ataiyasmith May 23, 2009 at 9:31 AM

i love this poem it is great i wish can go to dream land!

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