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Lucky Am I

Life is a story that begin a new chapter each day with lines to fill.
And in the story of life I’m glad I have you to help me with my script.
Lucky Am I, because you are here to help me with the worries that fill my head.
I now know life is even better with a helping hand instead.
I only worry when you aren’t around it’s you who amplify my life.
What we share in life money and materials can’t bribe.
Lucky Am I, cause I got you to share the world with.
I don’t care how big the world get my love for you can have any space in it.
To the world your just a bona fide girl.
To me you are the world and you have your own universe.
And I want to complete your galaxy.
Lucky Am I, I got a thing for sweets and your my personal Milky Way.
You illuminate me your my sunlight.
As the night sail we watch for shooting stars under the moonlight.
Lucky Am I, because I have you as my best friend.
Each day for us another one to fulfill.
Another to day to remember why our love is real.

by Ecclesiastes Jonah
Message from the author: This is for those who love seeing that significant other everyday no matter what.

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{ 11 comments… read them below or add one }

1 KANEESHA June 3, 2009 at 4:31 PM

WHAT A GREAT POEM I LOVE IT!

2 Sharon Tulley June 3, 2009 at 6:56 PM

Simply…. beautiful **smiles**

3 xia mae manansala June 5, 2009 at 7:23 AM

hello its so nice to check it out i mean reading it……

hope ull be writing more>>>>>

4 Nontando June 11, 2009 at 12:48 AM

I love it…I love it a lot!
This speaks to my soul

5 ST@R June 11, 2009 at 11:34 AM

THIS IS SO CUTE :)

6 nikkie June 12, 2009 at 6:27 AM

I loved the poem. it is so wonderful, inspiring and touching.

7 nikkie June 12, 2009 at 6:53 AM

have only one word …. SUPERB

8 madhavi June 24, 2009 at 5:38 AM

Really a nice poem. to some extent defining a true lovers feelings.I like it

9 xiamae July 1, 2009 at 3:12 AM

i know its so nice…
but yah know i just want to mAke some request because its hurts deep inside to leave my one and only love in the philippines but he dont understand right he was still angry at me i just want to make him know how much i love him,,, and now im planning to make some suicide i cant do wait ANYmore……. i love everything happen at us… but i guess it was the last gudbye….. wish he was reading it now

10 nata_lee_love July 1, 2009 at 12:07 PM

Id like to second wat sharon said “its simply beautiful”

11 krishana March 8, 2010 at 12:13 PM

hey,
It’s a poem which make my heart giggle…
while reading this,sometimes, i felt that i am saying that to my love and sometimes i felt that he is saying to me..
it’s nice.. i am starting to live with him, i know it’s gonna be the same experience which you have written here..
thanks for this cute poem..
take care..

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