You were the one I dreamed about, the one with all the strength,
the one I loved to be around no matter what happened,
I thought you was the best for me,the one I’d love forever, but
when you left it hurt me bad, and thought I would be sad forever,
but then I found someone new,the one who really loved me,
but every time I thought of you, my heart was something new.
I loved you more than anything in the world until you hurt me,
But now I’m sorry I guess it wasn’t meant to be.
by Jamie Stephens
Message from the author: It’s not very good but comment me about what u think bout it, plz
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i no how u feel. sometimes when u let your heart open for guys its not the best idea. I have had my heart broken so many times its hard to count. but God will make a way for u to find the perfect one. Smile. i hope u find him
God Bless
Laura
YOU DID GREAT I LIKED IT….
IT WAS COOL SO YOU DON’T
HAVE TO WORRY BOUT IT…
The poem is really superb, Old affairs will disturb, We cannot put a curb,
Every memory is a herb.
i like it i can for sure relate
heyy its cute but not gud 4 a poem
i noe how u feel people hurt u but u gotta keep ur head up
Some times people leave u. It’s so sad.
its so sad how life is sometimes, just make the best if it girl….i realy like it
it was great. follow your heart ok girl..:)
sincerly jeanne b.
author of My Future
Love does hurt, but after a while you feel no pain, the pain goes to a weird feeling. Then you become cold heart person. You start to hate everything & everyone who ever lives or is living.
Great words and feelings, just work on the rhythm and rhyme scheme. Other than that it was REALLY GOOD! Don’t worry so much!
i love it and its so real
keep up the good work dear
this poem describes my last relationship perfectly. now that i have picked up the pieces of my brokenheart and moved on i am currenty 6 months pregnant with my now fiancee’s child and i have not once looked back n wondered what would have been
ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! Couldnt have been better!
very well expressed…i loved it…
i liked that poem it was really good… nice job
i could like 4 sure relate to it…… nice work gurl…..
HOPE TO HEAR MORE FROM YOU
LOVE XOXO
ADSIA
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liKE ACT liKE YOU DONT CARE EiTHER &+ iTS REAllY
GANNA TURN HiM ON AND MAKE HiM THiNK WOWW
SHE REAllY DONT CARE ANYMORE;;♥
totally loved it
i loved that cuz me and my boyfriend just broke up