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Why did he stop loving me?
Does he still feel love for me?
How could he forget so fast?
How could such sweet love not last?

Sometimes outlook cheats like lies
I have learned I can not believe my eyes
I may only trust the instincts of my heart
Cause now it is just you and me apart

Guess you did not knew how much it hurt
Free and faraway you are, just like a bird
Flying away like all the things we did share
Did you honestly just not care?

I remember when I see you
All the things we used to do
Now I cannot speak unless I cry
Nobody can tell you, but trying am I

I know you feel no longer need to see me
I have a need to say that I still love you
You have made your choice, that I must respect
I have no fear or pride I need to protect

Just as the sun must come back every day

To light and shine upon your way,
So I will from afar shine on you my dear
And hope someday again you’ll let me near

Your songs are playing in my head
I feel sorrow, and I think of you instead
Everywhere I go from day to day
Not knowing where I am or what I’ll say

I try to explain to you, but you don’t see
I need to go on. I need you to help me
I try to clear my head with smiles and be supreme
The world is the reality, and you the dream

A face, a smile, a person, I know that I love
A friend, a lover, a voice, just sent from above
A soul, a part, a piece of me, who felt in to disuse
Somebody, that’s you, the one, I was devastated to lose

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1 KK July 12, 2009 at 2:45 PM

Wow! I really love this poem! It is very creative and comes straight from the heart. I love the part about the bird and also the part about the sun. And I just LOVE the last line… everytime I read it gives me chills! Great please do keep posting ;)

2 Gloisha July 13, 2009 at 4:18 PM

I so love this poem..everytyme i read it i think of mi ex!!!!!!!!!!….i feel to believe this poem iz everythang about uz..how i feel bout him..n he does the same thang to meh..i reali luv it

3 johnisha July 24, 2009 at 9:39 PM

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL IT EXPLAINS SO MUCH MORE THAN YOUR TELLING,I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL I JUST ENDED MY RELATIONSHIP OF THREE YEARS.YOU STATED YOUR THOUGHTS VERY NEATLY.

4 Angle August 15, 2009 at 1:16 PM

I love this poem it is so cute. I love it!!!!!! this inspiers me to read and try to write poems

5 Mulu August 25, 2009 at 3:11 PM

Poem is touchin reminds me of my ex, so well written. Kip mo cumin

6 Marvin boyza September 30, 2009 at 12:47 AM

This poem is verry touching

7 Marvin boyza September 30, 2009 at 12:53 AM

i love dis poem it is well writen and it is very touching and remind me of peaple i loved and peaple i love,i say keep on writing u write very inspiring poems u are very pasinate in this so i say keep up the gud/fabulas work

8 Fallen_star October 2, 2009 at 1:51 PM

I’m totally speechless..you have beautifully expressed the feeling that i’m going through..tried to shout it out loud,scribble it down,every possible thing to get it off my chest but i failed..your poem made me cry a thousand tears but i’m happy that i can now express myself through your poem..thank you for such a lovely poem

9 Michael gi November 21, 2009 at 1:32 PM

The poem is quite putting one in high spirits with an unutterable glimpse.excellent

10 kharen January 6, 2010 at 12:22 AM

it was creative

i can relate my self

i just wanted to know who is the author??

thnx

11 savannah February 1, 2010 at 9:03 AM

That was sooo gorgeous and i def. can relate to it

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