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Love-Dawn Will Darn Hearts That Are Torn

On love I have full trust
By it, my heart will not rust
It will force me to digest
And using love, I will adjust

On love I can surely rely
As love is truth not a lie
Love helps me fly Sky-high
A loveless heart is totally dry

On love I can write a thesis
As love is life’s main axis
Love can solve any crisis
Love alone can create an oasis

On love is built an Empire
As love alone can usefully inspire
Please love soon, life may expire
Enjoy love’s fruits, before you retire

On love depends a pure heart
As such a heart, only love can comfort
Greatest lessons, only love can impart
Please to love now start, time is short

On love never put the blame
By giving excuses that are lame
As you will derive only shame
Your loveless heart, use love to tame

On love never develop hatred
As such an act is not sacred
If your love account goes red
Become impure your blood and head

On love if your faith deepens
Definitely a miracle happens
As before love, lose strength weapons
Heaven exchanges all love-coupons

On love if faith vanishes
Peace to mind, time banishes
By love alone, anguish diminishes
Comforts of Heaven, love furnishes

On love lies, my whole hope
I am tied with love by belief-rope
Whether the path is steep or a slope
Love and I find in each other vast scope.

by mv.venkataraman

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1 Michael June 29, 2009 at 4:17 PM

I loved this poem it explains all the aspects that love covers and it hit home with me, great writing

2 Brittany Scott July 4, 2009 at 10:08 PM

Umm, This poem touched my heart and I think that if anybody whp has love problems should read this and think about it. This poem filled my heart with alot more love.

3 KK July 5, 2009 at 6:34 PM

Wow this poem is beautiful. It’s all true also… without love you become an unfeeling monster full of hate. Love is a bitter sweet affect. You covered all the positives but not the negitives….anywho awesome poem! ;D

4 Kristel September 28, 2009 at 10:36 AM

It seems like it has more logic than feeling. Maybe try to write a poem that tells all the logic of love, and then near the end explain why all the logic doesn’t matter. Maybe it’ll help, just an idea. :)

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