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Kiss

Do you feel this?
It’s like the wind. Gone. Suddenly near.
Why must it disappear?
Feels just like a kiss.

Do you feel this?
It’s getting near. Stopped. So close.
Can’t touch. Just see it glows.
Feels just like a kiss.

Did you feel it?
Now it’s gone. Once again alone
Our love has surely grown
A kiss feels like a benefit

by Line Kjergaard

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Rating: 4.1/5 (35 votes cast)

{ 25 comments… read them below or add one }

1 Eriel Holmes September 21, 2009 at 10:12 AM

Wow, that’s beautiful. I love that. It reminds me of my boyfriend.

2 josie September 21, 2009 at 3:54 PM

this is good poems

3 vanessa garcia September 21, 2009 at 4:25 PM

i really like this poem, it is very different and expresses such emotion, keep writing because it is really good

4 Butterfly September 23, 2009 at 10:28 AM

I liked it. *-*

5 jesus cerrillo September 24, 2009 at 2:52 PM

this is the most beautifulist thing i ever heared. im gonna give it to my baby momma=).

6 georgette perez September 28, 2009 at 3:56 PM

not really true a kiss if u really love that persone who kissed u it stays there 4 ever and ever no matter what u do if u brak up or not

7 lea October 8, 2009 at 3:10 PM

that’s beautiful i love it who new a kiss could be so beautiful
i think about this boy i onec loved and will always love :)

8 krystalyn November 19, 2009 at 1:00 PM

that was really good.
good job

9 CALVIN SIPHIWE December 3, 2009 at 9:29 AM

I LOVE IT IT REMIND ME MY GIRLFRIEND. THANK YOU FOR WRITTING IT

10 kinah December 7, 2009 at 5:48 AM

very nice

11 Meghann Burson December 11, 2009 at 8:51 AM

This is a very goood poem it just reminds of my Kiss with a young boy I used to go out with. VERY GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

12 sima December 23, 2009 at 9:29 PM

I LOVED IT

13 Whatever You Say~~~ December 24, 2009 at 4:44 PM

Thats was beautiful…. I read it and thought of my boyfriend..:)

<33Cassie4eva:)

14 brandy December 26, 2009 at 1:25 AM

nice

15 stuped December 30, 2009 at 9:04 PM

that was soooooooooooooooooooooo wered7iy

16 Emily Louise Heeks December 31, 2009 at 7:20 PM

Sweet :) :D : :*

17 colt koepke January 5, 2010 at 8:55 AM

that was truely amazing, you have inspired me to continue to go after the women that i love even if the love thats there should be forbiden. please keep writing poetry in the long run its awe inspiring and an isperation to many… thank you

18 Abba kila January 6, 2010 at 6:25 AM

Very interested,keep it up!

19 MONICA January 8, 2010 at 2:40 PM

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!

20 jonna January 20, 2010 at 3:56 AM

yah its preety insteristing

21 rachel January 21, 2010 at 1:10 PM

i love it!!!

22 tae tae love bird January 26, 2010 at 9:56 AM

i feel u iwant to cry

23 shay January 27, 2010 at 10:20 AM

haha i thought of my ex idk what i think about him anymore

24 howardken February 10, 2010 at 5:42 AM

it inspire me to make my own…….

25 Dwyane V February 12, 2010 at 6:58 PM

I like it.

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