Do you feel this?
It’s like the wind. Gone. Suddenly near.
Why must it disappear?
Feels just like a kiss.
Do you feel this?
It’s getting near. Stopped. So close.
Can’t touch. Just see it glows.
Feels just like a kiss.
Did you feel it?
Now it’s gone. Once again alone
Our love has surely grown
A kiss feels like a benefit
by Line Kjergaard
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Wow, that’s beautiful. I love that. It reminds me of my boyfriend.
this is good poems
i really like this poem, it is very different and expresses such emotion, keep writing because it is really good
I liked it. *-*
this is the most beautifulist thing i ever heared. im gonna give it to my baby momma=).
not really true a kiss if u really love that persone who kissed u it stays there 4 ever and ever no matter what u do if u brak up or not
that’s beautiful i love it who new a kiss could be so beautiful
i think about this boy i onec loved and will always love
that was really good.
good job
I LOVE IT IT REMIND ME MY GIRLFRIEND. THANK YOU FOR WRITTING IT
very nice
This is a very goood poem it just reminds of my Kiss with a young boy I used to go out with. VERY GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVED IT
Thats was beautiful…. I read it and thought of my boyfriend..:)
<33Cassie4eva:)
nice
that was soooooooooooooooooooooo wered7iy
Sweet
: :*
that was truely amazing, you have inspired me to continue to go after the women that i love even if the love thats there should be forbiden. please keep writing poetry in the long run its awe inspiring and an isperation to many… thank you
Very interested,keep it up!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!
yah its preety insteristing
i love it!!!
i feel u iwant to cry
haha i thought of my ex idk what i think about him anymore
it inspire me to make my own…….
I like it.