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Just a dream

I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
and wonder if I’ll feel that way again
you look at me;…
With those eyes I know so well
always bright, so deep and so sad
as though you’re always in control
of the situation, but not today
not now.

Now I’m so scared
like for once you don’t have the answer
I gaze at you;…
looking deep into those beautiful eyes
Hoping to understand
why you’ve said those things you did
I wonder for a moment, if you still love me
If this is all a dream, If I shall wake next morning
and be relieved,

You look at me
with a confusion I have never seen
slowly pull me towards you,
and wipe the tears from my cheek,
but, I wake up, crying, thinking that maybe
never that happened,
I look up, as tear rolls slowly
down my check
I can believe what happened to me,
I opened my eyes, oh God
was only a dream!

by Janet Baez

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Rating: 4.5/5 (31 votes cast)

{ 37 comments… read them below or add one }

1 kayla fowler May 8, 2009 at 12:00 PM

these poems are AMAZING

2 amela amson May 11, 2009 at 10:26 PM

For your sake Thank God it was just a dream.

3 KK May 13, 2009 at 5:21 PM

Oh my I have major chills. Thats was crazy intense and deep. My my I don’t know what elso to say…

4 cheryl May 14, 2009 at 4:52 PM

hey i absolutely love the poems that u write.. it’s like u r reading my mind…. wow

5 cheryl May 14, 2009 at 4:53 PM

I ABSOLUTLY LOVE UR POEMS.. IT’S LIKE U R READING MY THOUGTS…

6 david May 14, 2009 at 6:48 PM

i love these :) wow u r surely an awsome writer keep it up!

7 cheryl May 14, 2009 at 7:20 PM

i really enjoyed tis poem.. i hope to see more of ur work soon….

8 nena May 18, 2009 at 10:53 PM

wow!! she is amazing. I like her and her poems

9 rocky May 21, 2009 at 12:59 PM

oh my good, she is amazing, who is this girl?

10 bob May 25, 2009 at 8:55 AM

this is good. I like it. so different than Missing you. she is good.

11 xHuRtXmEx May 26, 2009 at 9:00 AM

really good xx

12 Cindy Lement May 26, 2009 at 12:13 PM

Do you know how good this poem is? It’s a great one! I gave you 5 stars :)

13 Nick May 27, 2009 at 3:21 PM

Great poem, very well written

14 TAZZ May 28, 2009 at 7:48 AM

its so touching .wow!

15 maria May 28, 2009 at 10:22 AM

this is really good.nice one

16 destin June 8, 2009 at 7:47 PM

good one!!! I have some chills for a second. well done.

17 Rubie July 7, 2009 at 4:56 PM

Its just a dream,u never know what if tommorow only god.

18 perpetua July 29, 2009 at 3:21 AM

wow… well writen.i like her n her poems!

19 shawn thomas August 1, 2009 at 11:00 PM

i liked that poem because i understand just what it mine

20 J.loeto August 3, 2009 at 6:18 AM

this is a beautiful piece indeed…

21 li August 6, 2009 at 9:11 PM

this is beautifull and dont deny that give me some chills, but I like it.

22 sonya August 8, 2009 at 5:51 PM

just give me some chills. good one.

23 flesh August 17, 2009 at 7:34 AM

This is how I want this nightmare to be a dream. Jaime you know I did this for the kids. I dont love her at all. You are the one for me. please baby read the poems too. Janet my girlfriend like poems too, I will give you 5 stars for this one.

24 danny August 19, 2009 at 9:53 PM

Yes let me wake up from this dream. Sara come back to me. Thanks Janet for this poem, I like it give you 5 stars.

25 Brittney August 24, 2009 at 1:29 PM

this is beautiful in so many degrees, it really touched my heart, keep up the good work!!

26 hana August 24, 2009 at 11:18 PM

yeah, I just want to wake up from my dream girl. this is nice 5 stars

27 derek August 27, 2009 at 11:19 PM

good some mysteries nice job 5 stars

28 rose September 2, 2009 at 9:19 AM

scary and funny, nice girl good job. 5 stars

29 rocky September 4, 2009 at 5:35 AM

good very nice, 5 stars

30 morena September 6, 2009 at 7:37 PM

this one is give me some chills, nice one.5 stars.

31 laurie September 10, 2009 at 10:11 AM

good one janet 5 stars

32 hazem02 September 11, 2009 at 11:29 PM

at least we live a pretty sweet moment through our dream..
so beautiful dear sweet poet..
yours,,
hazem al..

33 SAMMY September 11, 2009 at 11:44 PM

sweet and nice. Good job, 5 stars

34 Ely September 18, 2009 at 3:59 AM

another one master piece 5 stars

35 john September 22, 2009 at 12:48 PM

little bid of scary, but awsome. 5 stars

36 mario September 25, 2009 at 10:14 AM

what you trying to do scared me, jaja nice 5 stars

37 jessy September 27, 2009 at 8:10 PM

Great poem, very well written,its so touching .wow! 5 stars

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