I tell myself, to rise and shine, every morning.
I look at you, wondering Why? every day.
I go to sleep, with tears in my eyes, every night.
I tell myself, to appreciate and smile, every time.
I think of you, and feel sorrow, every morning.
I go to school, knowing you are there, every day.
I see shadows, floating by my eyes, every night.
I tell myself, to forget, I failed, every time.
I wake up, sad and exhausted, every morning.
I look insanely at you, you are with her, every day.
I tell myself, to rest my mind, every night.
I ask myself, who was we? Was it just me?
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i love this poem it realy apeals to me…
you are really good i bet you are/will be a pro
YES I”M SO FRIGGIN HAPPY RIGHT NOW! Poemsonly is working again! Anyways I really like this poem and can also relate. Actually I’m sure anyone could like/relate to this poem even if they don’t really like poetry. Keep writting
OMG IT SEEMS LIKE I FEEL LIKE THAT I CAN
RELATE LOVED IT
WOW!!!! I don’t know what else to say. This poem is unlike any other!
This is good, even though it mad me cry.
Lovely poem,pls come bring me up.
wow… the diggity bomb!!!! it expresses so much with who ever contains so much stress 24hrs with out the one!!! this poems descirbes the fill of so much ppl!!! add me facebook lily million!!
add me facebook lily million
this is a very good poem…..loved it hope ur still writting i mean im sure there are alot of young people who can use your inspiration
neeh,nice poem very very very nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
It was wonderful i am lookign forward to using this for a favorite poem by someone else in my project. i can really relate cause i felt like that before
i read this poem and see what i feel, like someone read my mind and decided to put it down for me
omged!!! i love it!!! u have to see my poem
its called lost love
beautiful….so real i could almost touch it!
OMFG THIS STORY IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL ……like exactly…thnx
My relationship is what this describes thourghly
Dat is sorrowful. nnnnnnnnnnnccccccccccccccccooooooooooooohhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!.
omg. this totally fits my entire life. amazing! it’s as if you are a voice inside of me that finally got out…or should i say tears wow.
wow it made me cry i understand what your writing about great work never stop writing poetry because i enjoy reading it . . .
that was an amazing poem! im going though something like that right now keep writing
sssssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad
Wow… you are a true poet. Snaps!
U R AMAZING!!!!
DON’T EVER STOP CAUSE U MAKE ME HAPPY & UR SO GOOD AT IT! 5 STARS
you inspire me
nice poem, it relates to a friend of mine.
i hope she’s doing fine. i lost contact with her!:/
i really love this peom, because always telling myself the smae thing very day and have i how to feel more alive. but you can’t keep your mind off the person you love.
this is so much like my story right now….. kind of hurts to read it and just think about him…. i miss him so much
For the girls who have good guys and dont value them like i am doing……….
wow i had the same thing happen to me it never goes away i love your poetry keep writing
wow this poem is insipring it reminds me of a friend !!!
lol
i understand eveything in this poem nd its so sad…..anyways it was a good job writing this poem though
This poem is kind of related to me!!:)
I Absolutely Love This Poem.
I Can Relate To It So Much.
It’s Very Sincere And Touching(:
Your really great i like the poem and i can relate mostly to the first paragraph keep writing
i think i relate to this poem cause i’ve been friends with “BENIFITS” with jacob and there has been times that i would always see him with another girl @ the movies to either piss me off or tomake me jelouse
i remember when i cought my boyfriend cheating……this poem describe me how i felt. i dont know else what to say…not only that it reminded me but also made me cry.
nice poem….
that is true i go to school ever day day to see u and her together
i lov that poem
This Is A Peom About Me ;D Its Exactly How I Feel
gosh i just loved this poem.
very nice .you got me back .
This poem really is nice and makes sence
Knowin that this happens to other people makes me feel human .
I loved this poem. It made me remember what happened to me last year. I was in love with a guy and he broke up wit me for my best friend. It hurt to see them together so i no how u feel and im srry that u had to feel that pain.
i truly understand that
i love this
Brings back memories! Good job