I feel these words deep in my core..
something like love at first sight but somewhat more…
its a feeling of overwhelming substance from which you can’t release…
words are not enough for this overwhelming caprice…
have you ever felt like you can’t express your feelings so you just laugh…
my words in my brain are like hilarious notions I can’t graph…
so many ideas in my head like an ingenius plot..
its something in your soul… it can’t be taught…
so as I battle my mind and actually find a way to put these words on paper…
my soul still burns with the feeling of insufficient waver…
but I have no worries because my brain becomes adaptive…
it learns, becomes sharp and it will no longer be captive…
the shackles of verbs and adjectives will be unwound…
that day the world will see my genius will be found….
by Erick Baltodano
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We’ve probably all been there at least once…. No words to write down on the page but they’re expected to come. It’s very frustrating. It makes you think of giving up looking at all you’ve already written. You just think why continue? But you don’t give up. Why? You still write and you still write because once a writer always a writer. You’re diseased with it and you pass it along to others who wish to join in and find their own talent. Great poem, it is very different but it’s a good different.
KK
Thank you.. thats exactly how i felt. I knew i wanted to write cause i felt it but nothing came out. So i wrote how I felt. Thanks again…
a great one ..really some nice vocablary with great rhyme which also carry a message..
really great poem i loved it
hey everyone
where you guys left with a image in your head if so what?
How do you feel after?
One side of the world cries
One side of the world lies
One side of the world loves
One side of the world always close its eyes
Now you tell me, which one is the ture world?
i think that this poem is very true and inspriring to me because anyone should be able read and think bout this like i did and my thought is very clear
Absolutely brill !!
This is by far one of the best poem i have ever read!
really good
I like this poem. It very thought out and deep.
let art do the talking
let art do the talking as you bleed with that pen!