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I’m nothing without you

My tears are flowing for you
As my mind wonders and heart beats
My body is nothing without you

And as the wetness of my cheek are beginning to dry
And my thoughts weaken and try to forget
I feel like nothing without you

The beats within my chest were real,
Something that no one will ever steal
When there is nothing without you

But as I try to forget you more and more
My body grows weaker and begins to wear
Mind floats, rises to react

I know I’m nothing without you…

by Ashu

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1 Aiyana May 28, 2009 at 12:08 PM

The lie
It made her not like me.

She says she’s scared,
I dont think she should be.

At first i thought she wouldnt like me so i tried to be her friend
But i guess she was only being nice back so i wouldnt “hurt her”

Yes the lie

It’s a tragidy when it comes between friends

2 KK May 28, 2009 at 7:17 PM

Ok girl look… you ARE DEFIANTLY someone without this person whoever he/she is. Just by writing this poem it shows you are someone without this someone. I say this alot and I’m not trying to be mean but: You can’t stop living your life because you lose someone/something you love (weither that is literally or not). I can feel your struggle reading this poem and feel all the tears you have cried as if they are raining on me. Good… don’t give up :D

3 Nichole May 29, 2009 at 11:23 AM

I can relate its good though

4 Sharon Tulley May 31, 2009 at 3:13 AM

I’m somehow reminded of a Kelly Clarkson song that I’ve been thinking about today. Life isn’t the same with those you care about the most. Its not the end of life… and as a poem I wrote once goes, “sometimes you think its ending, but that’s only the start..” Perhaps… something may have ended, but the sky hasn’t fallen in and you are still alive to write the poem. Everyday is a new chance to start a new chapter of your life and the ending isn’t written. You still have a choice of what story that will be, be it comedy or romance or the greatest mystery of all.. and you can choose what characters will be a part of the unfolding of that story. Be the hero of your own book and stand proud… remember in stories.. often the hero starts as the most ordinary person who is tested and challenged to become the extrordinary. Don’t give up!

5 Erin June 17, 2009 at 5:15 PM

i can relate to this poem because i just lost the love of my life and i am nothing without him in my life

6 Alyssa Atwater October 25, 2009 at 12:50 AM

i dedicate this poem to Anthony.. my best freind (The Love Of My Life)
always and forever

7 raeee November 8, 2009 at 2:02 PM

woooww ashu did not write that poem. it’s by Gary R. Hess. SCAMM

8 krishana February 28, 2010 at 6:35 AM

hey ashu…
i dont know y every1 is after ur life but the poem is great..
it’s not alie..it’s truth …
truth of evry1 who lost some1 in life…
i can understand it and relate it with me
thanks

9 gorguzz April 8, 2010 at 12:06 AM

sooo kuteeee
nawwwwwwwwwwwwww

10 karen opoku taylor August 16, 2010 at 7:03 AM

please tell Paul that i love him with all my heart and can’t live without him by my side

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