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I’ll Be Your Crying Shoulder {Your Tears Here}

Hey you, this is what I’ve been trying to tell you everyday
What I meant to tell you from the very first day….
Let the brick walls you’ve created fall, let me in let me witness it all
Let those vexatious tears begin darling,
Do not hold back your pain oh so deep-
My care and love for you is alive not dead
By me you will NEVER be misled
~
I’ll be your crying shoulder
I’ll be your shoulder to cry on
Rest your head and shed your tears here
Written in a colored marker
Watch as sodden black tears fall
I’ll be love’s suicide and grasp you as you fall
~
When raging rain is crashing down
You know someone will be waiting with an umbrella, to lift you off the ground
Even when the storm clears, I will still be here
And I’ll still be your shoulder to cry on
For I am someone who knows exactly what you need
And I am someone who understands exactly how you feel
I am that person dreaming
….hoping for that day when
you take your eyes away off the terrain
and see me gazing back at you
offering my heart and hand

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Rating: 4.5/5 (40 votes cast)

{ 21 comments… read them below or add one }

1 TAZZ March 8, 2010 at 10:16 AM

aahhh !! even someone is crying on your shoulder but still it feel so good , satisfying coz then you know that you have found someone who is yours and that feeling is great ….very nice poem .

2 katy March 8, 2010 at 1:14 PM

GREAT POEM I LOVED IT
YOUR SUCH A GREAT POET

3 Mariamzz March 9, 2010 at 1:12 PM

this is amazing more than amazing bgd bgd unbelievable….
am in luv wiz it…..<3<3

4 lauren March 9, 2010 at 1:26 PM

great poem but I’ve seen better. try and work on your descriptions

5 KK March 9, 2010 at 6:26 PM

Thank you guys :) And I usually do get more into descriptions, but I find myself getting way into them. But I promise I will add more in my next poem. Thank you for the advice :)

6 AIZA March 10, 2010 at 11:02 AM

hey guyz poem has teached me some thing i did not now

7 cc March 10, 2010 at 1:25 PM

Wow incredible piece i can certainly relate to it but i rather him drowned into his tears because he dont deserve any human to love him

8 Louise March 11, 2010 at 12:16 PM

I really like this ………..gr8 pace/rhythm seemed to flow & I fell into the emotion of it………….brill

9 La Flakizz March 11, 2010 at 2:21 PM

i like diz poem

10 A new Start March 13, 2010 at 2:39 AM

Heart touched poem. i liked sooo much.
Best wishes.

11 Heather S. March 18, 2010 at 4:24 PM

This is an amazing poem, my best friend is having a rough time right now and I think I will give her this to ensure her I’m here…; )

12 olivia stacy March 31, 2010 at 3:29 PM

great poam

13 Maria April 15, 2010 at 9:35 PM

I enjoyed the poem–has emotional attachment-very meaningful

14 Dunya April 17, 2010 at 2:50 PM

Word cannot describe how a great poet u are u truley understand how to put all ur feelings on papper I love this poem so much I showed it to all my freinds and they said wow that kk is a great poet!:)

15 Marilyn April 27, 2010 at 7:59 PM

I love it very pretty

16 Natalie May 8, 2010 at 1:42 PM

WOW!! this poem imspired me i loved it…

17 Cassandra May 24, 2010 at 8:28 PM

it so cute and it nice i love it
it relly good
you such a good poet♥♥♥♥

18 $3®w@h June 1, 2010 at 7:55 AM

that was amazing you have to do more stuff

it was cute e<3 <3 <3

19 jennifer June 5, 2010 at 8:08 PM

its true what they say!!! i love it hope you keep it up with all this!!! :)

20 jen July 7, 2010 at 10:37 PM

It’s nice..more power…

21 hacela ann buquel ibana July 19, 2010 at 1:21 AM

its nice…its really good..keep it up…

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