My love for you was intense
I loved you, I mean really loved you
Our love was magical…
Like in the books or movies
You lift me out of my feet
And show me the meaning of love
I thought that I know you
But I fell in love with a stranger
Yes, a stranger, that I give my time,
My love and everything that I had
I just thought I really knew him
But I didn’t, He lied to me
And left me alone and stranded
Too many memories
Of our days and nights
I tried to forget them
But they replay in my mind
I can even believe them
Cause they were all lies
What a stranger! But some how
I believe that you feel in love with me
And me head over heels
You had no idea! You didn’t even know!
You took my hand to a road that I didn’t know
And make me believe that it was a world of our own
You didn’t care about hurting me
Or living me stranded
Or you were getting back at me
For something that happened
Why me? You knew that I loved you
Your head, your mind and your heart was not right
Why? I never hurt you, I just loved you
But, is going to be late to make things right
Strange, but in love and couldn’t hold on
It couldn’t be fixed; I don’t deny that I tried
I said I love you, more than one time
But with you neglecting
I don’t denied that I cry
Stranger, good bye, you are free
To hurt someone else
You can hang on forever,
And feel things are right
But emotions become stressed
And you heart strings become tight
You were the light of my life
And mean everything to me
I suppose our love wasn’t mean to be
My heart you have broken
And I have wiped my last tear
But, a new life in me has awoken
Now, I won’t ever have to live in fear
by janet baez
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This is so true, My story I guess. fall in love and get lie to. I get the point, cause that happened to me. thanks janet. give you 4 stars
Ok liked you poem. But the beginning was a little rough… it seemed more like a story. But I LOVE the part “Stranger, good bye, you are free To hurt someone else” and “But emotions become stressed And you heart strings become tight You were the light of my life”. Anywho sweet poem… that being sad if it is true.
I think this poem say a lot, I dont think that It was rough at the begining, I think It was explaining how everything started. Sometimes we loved for real and it turns bad on us, we get cheat on or we get hurt that how the circle of love is. I gave you 5 stars for this. thanks Janet
nice, I feel ya! I gave you 5 stars
this poem is good, explain a lot. Is like my ex-raul, he used me and left me, This is dedicated to him. thanks janet
YEAH.,,IT HAPPENED TO ME THIS TIME..PANGS OF BETRAYAL.I LOVE YOUR POEM..HURT TO HEALING..KEEP IT UP!BID OUR STRUGGLING HEARTS TO BE STIL AND ONE WITH GOD.GODBLESS!
You are great! i loved every woord in this poem, believe me!
thanks for the comments. Sometimes I get inspired in the moment, could be mad, sad, happy or love. That how we write by inspiration. Is like a flash in our minds of poets, we can have experience from others or we can use our own, depend on the moment. Hope you enjoy this. thanks again….
janet
Girl came back to read the poems. You are great, I cried on this one. Cause I can related to it. I feel in love with someone that was good to me, until I find out the real truth on him. Now I think that I feel in love with a stranger too. I gave you 5 stars on this. thanks
girl ths poem has touched me very badly cause ive been there. i wont say much on what happened but take it from there poem. i gave u 5 stars on this. peace
I fell in love too. Everything was fine, I belive every single world he said to me. Until he left me for his ex-wife. She letf him for someone younger before but now he still wants her. He told me all lies and destroy me but, like you said ” My heart you had broken and I wipe my last tear, a new life in me has awoken and I won’t ever has to live in fear”. I this poem is telling my life and what I lived. Janet, thank you so much. I give you 5 stars.
Wow is good to know that she can write about love in many different ways. This one is sad. Janet I like it and I will give you 5 stars on it. My girlfriend and I wants to see more inpirational poems of love. We thank you so much for bring us together. keep the good work janet!!
I understand when you relate it to it, Is good cry or laugh sometimes, that is how love is. I will keep writing, thank you so much for all the support that all you are giving me. I also like to thanks Poems Only for let me be here and write and show you all what I can do. Thanks again for everything…..
Janet
this is really awesome these kind of poems are my favourites keep sharing.
This is the way I feel about my ex. I hate her but Im here for the kids. I’m in love with my lover Jaime. I want to thanks Janet for all her poems. I gave her 5 stars
hey, I’m there too, but the other way around. I was the one who hurt her bad and now I realize the she is the one I love. How can I mend her heart, How can I fix things, she wont even pick up the phone.
sorry I was all sentimental. I like the poem I gave you 5 stars. I just want to tell Sara that I love her and I hope she forget me. I love you Sara
i wrote a poem about meeting a stranger 2:
my life was all about u nothing in my life wasn’t about
u,ur my love,u made me laugh,made me happy when i was sad
told me funny story’s.I like it all but you were a jerk, couldn’t understanded
when my friend told me but now i do , you took a way a girls heart & not feeling heartless knowing she died on your hands.Your a prisoner in everyone’s heart. it never happened 2 me but i just wanted to write it
hope yall like it.
this is nice, I have a betrayal triangle, he, me and his wife, what a deal, I was the one who get hurt in all of this and the one who was lied to. thanks for posting this, I give you 5 stars.
Brilliant just going throught same thing 5 stars
Amazing, remarkable, Fantastic
You have written a lovely poem which is really hurt touching.
I give you 5 stars
I was there too. It hurt more when is healing, nice job 5 stars
i can relate to this poem becuz this has happen to me so many times
this is something different, you write to love, but in here is love hurt. amazing 5 stars
this a great poem and little hurtfull on the side. I like it thoug..sometimes we have to go this in life. 5 stars
betrayal!!!! those hurt a lot. I been there too. like this one very much 5 stars.
this poem is good I really like it. Is like sound from the heart but I know how it is to get hurt… 5 stars
wow absolutely love it, nice one 6 stars
this is all true, it happend to me, I love my boyfriend so much and he left me for his ex.I know he is not happy now, and he is stroglin to make things right with her and me but is not easy, he can stay what he is, Im free in mind and I can wait for my heart to heal and who knows what life brings me. 5 stars
nice one Janet, love it. I fill the same way when my girlfriend cheat on me. 5 stars
Omg I love your work! It is so me right now! I love knowing that someone out there feels what I feel that Im not alone! So I thank you for you insperasion! Thank you Lots Sierra
I can said you have a nice touch in writing 5 stars
impresive!!!what a heart to write like this..I should pass this to my ex-boyfriend, jaja. good one 5 stars
thanks for the comments, thanks to poems only too for having me here. Im still writing, I had a few poems to post and I will do that soon. thank you.