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I Am

I am outgoing and determined
I wonder what my father is doing right now
I hear him calling my name from time to time
I see him in my dreams with his arms wide open
I am outgoing and determined

I pretend it does not bother me that he is not around
I feel that he does love me
I touch his face in my dreams
I worry about him being all alone
I cry knowing that I cannot be with him
I am outgoing and determined

I understand that he was very young
I say to him I love you anyway
I dream that we will have a close relationship
I try to let him know that I love him
I hope I get to be with my dad very soon
I am outgoing and determined

by Brandi S.

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1 Kristi May 11, 2009 at 10:20 AM

Awww. this is such a cute wonderful poem. i like it. it’s expresses how u feel. and people understand.

2 nawal May 12, 2009 at 7:09 AM

i know how u feel, u keeping it reall. the poem was nice.

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