The sun rise bear away the morning mist
Two lovers wake up start the day with a tender kiss
The bird singing song in their nest
It’s been three years since they have met
Even on the day when they are apart
They talk to each other by means of heart
They want to lock themselves in the prison of time
Because loving each other forever is their crime
On a beach while taking a sun bath, he hold her hand he asked
What do you want in the future from me?
She answered – a beautiful house of dream for you and me
Things never stay the same they change
One day he came to knew something very strange
He found himself in the sorrow storm
Don’t know what’s right or whats wrong
The next day he goes to tell her
I love someone else I can’t go further
She was dazed to hear these difficult words
She always thought I’m the only one he loved
He then turned his back to her face
And then never come back to her place
Five years passed they never see eachother
She moved on with her life, now she is a child’s mother
One day she received an envelope in which there was a key and a note
It was his letter, this is what he wrote
Hello darling! It’s been five years since I have gone
You might expected me to come back but you find yourself wrong
I wrote this letter to tell you something that I couldn’t say before
It might be the answer of the questions that you have been looking for
When you will receive this letter I might have died
After leaving you I have only cried and cried
One day I came to knew, only counted breath are left in my life
It’s crazy how things change while I was planning to make you my wife
I found myself tangled In a web of sorrow
How can I promise of being always together, when I don’t have tomorrow
Once I decided to tell you, but thought can you take the pain
How can I make you believe that from this love there is nothing you could gain
I’m sorry that I hurt you
But there was nothing else that I could do
This was the only way to make you realize
So that you could move on in your life
With this letter there is key
This will open the door of your house of dream
Always be happy in your life
Make someone proud by being his loving wife
Just don’t forget me this is my last wish
Visit my grave, give it a little kiss
After reading this she couldn’t breath
She cried a river and scream aloud
Give letter a kiss with her mouth
by TAZZ
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Wow… im new to this website but i can honestly say that this is by far the best writing i’ve seen yet. A few mistakes but a great story and nice rhyme. Very creative, i look forward to more
This was an awesome poem/story. It was well written and easy to understand. The grammer seemed incorrect, but at the same time, I liked the style of it. Good Job! One of your bests!
Since you commented on my poem I’m going to comment on yours. I thought this poem had a nice kind of peaceful yet intense tone. It really got deep and was at times really emotional and intense. I really enjoyed this poem. This is one of the best or the best poem I have seen
Oh and I just read this to my mom she started crying and was speechless afterward.
nice! i love it,it makes me love my guy even more!you have some true talent now i want to go to the beach and take a sunbath tyhanks for being sooo modist and gentle and tender loving ~jessica
oops typo i ment thanks on the 2nd paregraph
oops agen i ment 2nd sentince
Nice..!
I may be sad as it is but I just could not help but cry. = (
I may hve cryed but it was a good cry.
Great poem, excellent emotion representation
This poem is a pleasure to read. The structure is precise and the content thought provoking, the message is outstanding…. your an amazing writer and i hope you continue to share your delightful poems.
ur dis poem bought tears to ma eyes………its amazin u left me speechless..
dis 1 is simply amazing…..it really made me cry………….superb
That was so touching. I automatically fell in love after the first word. some day I hope to get as good as you. That was amazing.
hi. not read many poems in here yet;but Tazz you’ve done a great job.. paints tru luv so wel with colors of sensitive,loving,caring,touching shades of life.. keep it up!
I SO LOVE THIS POEM! I can’t stop reading it and everytime I do I get that same feeling I got the first time I read this poem! WONDERFUL WONDERFUL WONDERFUL!
LOVE IT!
Very creative and touching. Reminds me of the Bridges of Madison County