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Feelin’

This thing that
I’m feelin’,
Feels wonderful
To me.
It comes in different
Ways each time.
It moves
In a different direction
With every motion.
Time after Time
I want more,
But I reject
From its
Temptation.
You love to
Tease me
Even though
You please me
With every stroke.
This feelin’
I feel is
Unrealistic…
Because…
you’re not here,
you’re in my mind.

by Jacqueist Bond

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1 stephani.anne May 22, 2009 at 8:49 AM

wowowwww. i like it, its really good, but the format is a little off, to man lines, you should make it in to sentences, i think it would be perfect.
But.. i dont want you to feel that you have to, it was just a suggestion. i really like the words to it tho!

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