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Exposed

The door is locked, the curtains are closed.
I feel your hands, got my body exposed.

Like a rose with thorns, withered and dead.
Still remembering the words unsaid.

This victim in pain, not necessarily unsatisfied.
Watching carefully, with desire to divide

Like a flower, this desire has proliferated
Grown and wanted more than it contained

My body and soul are disagreeing.
One kept looking, the other stopped seeing.

The wounds on my body are finally healing.
But inner pain will make my heart keep beating.

Concerned about the life you have in your hand?
It takes more than me, to expand the demand

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1 emily louise heeks February 15, 2010 at 4:52 AM

thats a wonderfull poem! :) it’s amazing.
write more because that’s awesome :D

2 KK February 15, 2010 at 4:45 PM

This right here describes my life. Great poems. Keep posting hun :)

3 Loll February 16, 2010 at 8:13 AM

Beautifull poem, keep them coming

4 bryttani February 16, 2010 at 10:13 AM

it was BEAUTIFUL

5 katy February 16, 2010 at 12:47 PM

I LOVED IT GREAT JOB
KEEP ON THE GOOD WORK

6 charmaine March 3, 2010 at 4:33 AM

true art!!!!love it

7 Meanie March 15, 2010 at 12:39 PM

You are mean!

8 Meanie March 19, 2010 at 1:00 PM

u suck dont ever write poems again pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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