Standing in the middle of the mountain
Up on me is falling snow
River of love is flowing
Standing by my side, the women I know
When she hold me in her arms
The sun goes down and night comes up high
She means so much to me without her I can’t survive
When I open my eyes I found myself all alone
Scared of the dark and no one to hold
I have a question for you
Does the dream ever come true?
Breathing in the air of love it feels so pure
See as far as you want to but you will not see hate anymore
Tears of blood are not pouring, there is no need to cry
Because no longer fray anymore in which someone dear can die
No need to close your eyes, no need to close your ears
Everything you don’t want to see or hear has been washed away In the past years
When I open my eyes I found myself living in the world
Where hate and fray is above faith and love
I have a question for you
Does the dream ever come true?
by Tazz
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Hey. Ive changed your poem a bit : …
…River of love is flowing
Standing with the boy I love
The sun goes down and night comes up high
Scared of the dark and no one to hold
Tears of blood are not pouring, there is no need to cry
Everything you don’t want to see or hear has been washed away in the past years
Will my dreams ever come true?
good poem, not what I expected
2 stars ok
WHOAAA!!!! That was intense!!! I am going to have nightmares tonight!!!! This is another one of my favorite poems now!!! 500million star!!!! Well all I can say is that we (that is all the living people in the entire world) determine tomorrow…. so hopefully it is a world we want to be living in.
good poem, I like it. If you believe it, it will come true.
interesting, more power 2 ur elbow
thats so true……
I think for me,
dreams do come true when you try to make it real.
such a superb poem,i love it.
fine write and clearly depicting writers views.
clear views of poet depicting the picture.
i love this one it helped me when i had some boy things goin on and think you
well I kind of like it 2 stars
this reminds me of what i would love for my boyfriend to do a little more ……
VERY INSPERATIONAL
ok I admit that is good, but to like it well some what.
hhah thats really kewl..
hopefull my dreams do come true:).
well i have a ? 4 you why cant you just never stop loving the person you love and just love someone that loves you
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>…………………..
hi
sorry about that just testing the system anyway! g
i love this poem its great i give it 4 stars this poem shows the perfect dream!!
i liked it, fulll of emotions and reality
i think its great……
You could paraphrase somehow but ehem I need some interpretation or picture on it.
what is love love is one chance one opertunaty to have some one to love
love is to hate as hate is to love as to finding your one true love as to the hardest thing you will ever have to do as to the best thing that will ever happen to you as to as to as to……
my gosh man… you have the words of a godesss.
well keep up the good, lovein works.
if i was gone home to God i would want that poem read to me
i think this poem relates to my poems alot and yes. Dreams do come true if only such a person who dreams these dreams, will come true. if oyu belive then yes.
i really love this poem it reminds me of my life of the way i veiw alot of things with my girl
Wow! thats amazing
keep going! You are awesome!!!!
i can’t help it…. it really touches my heart!!!
all i can say is Wow!!!….. GREAT…!
this poem is very nice i love iit is awsomeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D
this poem was soooo beautiful, amazing piece of work
well ii almost dream all dy all nite about dha same thinq and mayb it could chanqe my past and ecerythinq would be ok, i always think positive but sometimes i think its not met to happe,(; but i will always have faith….
superb buddy…………..
u done a great job…………
excellent………….
i hate your poem sorry but its not that good
i luv this poem i have sent it to all women out in the world.
hohohoho merry xmas wuth luv santa clause xxx
I want to print it off……….. It was such a lovely poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
does a dream ever come true? or
will the dream come true?
2 stars….
try to compact the lines…and rhyming should be there….
Man this poem is nice i wish i could write like this…..
I LUV POEMS LIKE DAT I WRITE MY SELF BUT I DONT THINK ITS AS GD AS URS
a wonderful poem written by is to be appreciated and u believe in that it comes true
hay w8 is this u should not do thid plz teach IT to me
i was woondering if you can send me some poems
i love your poem itreminds me of my past botfreinds and my life.
Hey Tazz what’s going on with the site????
dhats a pwetty poem c( :
I hate this poem…..is sick, I hate it it made me cry
hey ! guys thanks for your support but sadly we can no longer share our poem as it seems that this site is off..and who knows if it will work again or not . i always want to read your poems and also want to share mine so if you have written something new or want something new from me so plz mail me (tejumatrix@live.com) hope to hear from you soon …
that’s amazing man well done very beautiful and hopeful