Standing in the middle of the mountain
Up on me is falling snow
River of love is flowing
Standing by my side, the women I know
When she hold me in her arms
The sun goes down and night comes up high
She means so much to me without her I can’t survive
When I open my eyes I found myself all alone
Scared of the dark and no one to hold
I have a question for you
Does the dream ever come true?
Breathing in the air of love it feels so pure
See as far as you want to but you will not see hate anymore
Tears of blood are not pouring, there is no need to cry
Because no longer fray anymore in which someone dear can die
No need to close your eyes, no need to close your ears
Everything you don’t want to see or hear has been washed away In the past years
When I open my eyes I found myself living in the world
Where hate and fray is above faith and love
I have a question for you
Does the dream ever come true?
by Tazz
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Hey. Ive changed your poem a bit : …
…River of love is flowing
Standing with the boy I love
The sun goes down and night comes up high
Scared of the dark and no one to hold
Tears of blood are not pouring, there is no need to cry
Everything you don’t want to see or hear has been washed away in the past years
Will my dreams ever come true?
good poem, not what I expected
2 stars ok
WHOAAA!!!! That was intense!!! I am going to have nightmares tonight!!!! This is another one of my favorite poems now!!! 500million star!!!! Well all I can say is that we (that is all the living people in the entire world) determine tomorrow…. so hopefully it is a world we want to be living in.
good poem, I like it. If you believe it, it will come true.
interesting, more power 2 ur elbow
thats so true……
I think for me,
dreams do come true when you try to make it real.
such a superb poem,i love it.
fine write and clearly depicting writers views.
clear views of poet depicting the picture.