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Destiny

The first time we met, it was destiny
you and I, were meant to be.
You were so gentle, you were so true
when you first held my hand, I just knew.

So often when I am embracing you,
it seems that you exist in this world
only because of me and I exist because of you.

Now still together, Through laughter and tears our moments,
Our memories we have, shall never fade,
for those are the steps, that we have made
I couldn’t live, I couldn’t breathe
Without you by my side,
Never will I let you go,
My love will never hide

And in my heart you’ll always be
From now until forever,
No matter what, no matter where
We’ll always be together

I’ve never known a love like yours
nor thought it could be true,
But every time I kiss your lips
I feel what love can do

Here is the secret no one knows
That with only one kiss
The world move under your feet
Is like flying in the sky of love
Is only one ticket with no return

So, if the king can have his throne,
and if the bird can have his spring nest,
and God can have his heaven, with all his angels
then I, your queen, can have your love

So, in this life on in another
Together we will be

by Janet Baez

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Rating: 4.6/5 (36 votes cast)

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1 baby May 18, 2009 at 8:14 AM

I love this poem, make me cry. I want to fill like this when I find my true love. this is amazing.

2 pookie May 18, 2009 at 12:53 PM

very nice poem. I wish I could write that good the person that wrote it

3 ziaul chowdhury May 18, 2009 at 2:17 PM

Hi,
Just read your poem,and it absolutely makes sense, everything that has happend to me in the past 2 weeks is as if fate bought me and my girlfriend together.

4 nena May 18, 2009 at 10:52 PM

who is this girl? she is really good, I want to write like her, I like her poems. she make me cry

5 Alya faruk May 19, 2009 at 7:22 AM

I really like it

6 bety May 19, 2009 at 12:34 PM

awww…this is a beautiful poem.

7 Meli May 19, 2009 at 3:19 PM

WOW!!! there’snot muchto say but WOW…..u have touched my heart with your words..thank you!

8 DanielaPretell May 20, 2009 at 3:34 PM

i really like diz poem it make cry cuz i just remember of mah boyfriend
n it was really good……. n good job for the one who wrote diz poem
she or he did a great job……. =]

9 Nick May 27, 2009 at 3:30 PM

Yet again another incredible poem, 5 stars

10 maria May 28, 2009 at 10:27 AM

I hope I find someone and I fill this way again. this poem is incredible

11 destin June 8, 2009 at 7:41 PM

I like this poem, is like my story wow!!! I give you 5 stars…

12 cindy June 10, 2009 at 10:03 PM

It good to know that someone loves you like that. I would like to have a destiny like that some day…..

13 sonya June 15, 2009 at 1:04 PM

so real, some people want the destiny to turn this way, others would wish to it. give you 5 stars….

14 sam July 6, 2009 at 12:54 PM

i like this poem too much dear but i dont have love now she left me

15 Kelly July 16, 2009 at 5:14 PM

This poem is so sweet!! i love it!! absolutely love it!! It’s how i feel towards my boyfriens. i’ve seen other poems of yours and you are a great poet. I love all your poems! 5 stars

16 TEIA July 21, 2009 at 3:11 PM

I LOVE ITM, ITS SUCH A TRUELY SWEET POEM, I FELT AS THOUGH IT TOOK THE THOUGHT I HAVE FOR MY HUSBAND RIGHT OUT OF MY MOUTH

17 andy July 23, 2009 at 6:39 AM

i love it. i think this is a beautiful poem. bigups to Janet.

18 li August 6, 2009 at 9:08 PM

My God I love her poems, this is beautifull. nice job.

19 flesh August 17, 2009 at 7:31 AM

This is our love was. Jaime I love you. Janet girl you know how to make me cry 5 stars to you.

20 danny August 19, 2009 at 9:51 PM

baby, Sara this is all for you.. Thanks Janet I give you 5 stars

21 fai August 24, 2009 at 2:36 AM

beb’s this is just but wowwwww!!!!!

22 fei August 24, 2009 at 2:40 AM

Beb’s this is just but wow……………….!!!!!!

23 hana August 24, 2009 at 11:12 PM

Oh my God, this is goood!!!! I want my destiny to be like that too….Janet 5 stars

24 derek August 27, 2009 at 11:17 PM

This is goood and so true, Destiny believe it sometimes comes in our life in a touching way or in a simple way, but is real, good job 5 stars.

25 rose September 2, 2009 at 9:17 AM

amazing, I like the part “So, if the king can have his throne,and if the bird can have his spring nest,and God can have his heaven, with all his angels
then I, your queen, can have your love”. love it 5 stars

26 rocky September 4, 2009 at 5:32 AM

amazing poem. good job. another 5 stars

27 morena September 6, 2009 at 7:34 PM

cute poem, hope mu destiny is like this one some day.5 stars.

28 angelo September 8, 2009 at 5:29 PM

and this one too. thanks, very well made, I’m sure it was from the heart,.

29 laurie September 10, 2009 at 10:11 AM

I just tought that it was destiny when I met my husband and I still do, too bad that he dont fill the same way anymore!!!! 5 stars

30 SAMMY September 11, 2009 at 11:41 PM

I so true, cause Naomi is my destiny. Good job 5 stars

31 hazem02 September 12, 2009 at 3:34 AM

amazing one,, even got me speechless..
so beautiful..
hazem al..

32 jojo September 17, 2009 at 7:16 AM

very nice poem and made me think of jun my frist love and still today .I miss him alot.one day we will be together !!

33 Ely September 18, 2009 at 3:58 AM

wooow!! like this one, our destiny is like that, romantic 5 stars

34 john September 22, 2009 at 12:46 PM

this is something everyone whish for a good destiny in their lives. 5 stars

35 Cowboy September 22, 2009 at 4:31 PM

Damn good poem! 5 stars for sure!

36 kim September 22, 2009 at 8:11 PM

wow!! that is all i can say! =)

37 mario September 25, 2009 at 10:11 AM

I belive in destiny, we made our own in this life, I want my to be like this one,jaja nice one janet, 5 stars

38 jessy September 27, 2009 at 8:05 PM

this one is really good, you got a lot of talent janet 5 stars

39 M September 30, 2009 at 8:27 PM

EXCELLENT!!! Couldn’t have said it better myself

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