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HEYY READ HIM && HER I NEED FEEDBACK!!!
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10:00 PM
March 6, 2010


i_miss_you

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Post edited 10:01 PM - March 6, 2010 by i_miss_you

Heyy can you guys go to the new poens thing and look for Him&&Her by Cassie K'Lynn<33…. I need some feedback! Please be thruthful. I am 13 and need to know what to work on and what I am doing right!!!  


                                             READ AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!!!


                           Forever Thankful,

                                                    Cassie K'Lynn<33

~~~HeartsBurstIntoFire~~~

5:14 PM
March 11, 2010


Jules

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Do you mean as spelled “Him&&Her” or Him & Her? ”Him&&Her brings up nothing on search, only a looong list of poem entries to get lost in. Sorry, I can't find it.

Please give link.

6:32 PM
March 11, 2010


i_miss_you

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i lost it:[[ i will look for it and if i find one then i will come back to this post and put it on:]]


                             <33Cassie K'Lynn

~~~HeartsBurstIntoFire~~~

6:40 PM
March 11, 2010


i_miss_you

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Well the link was a hole bunch of weird stuff.. so ya.. but if you go to the new poems and look for Cassie K'Lynn<33 and the date was Mar. 06 2010 9:56pm and the title is Him && Her (with spaces..):]] i looked through the thing and then found it adnd found the date and then i was happy:]] lol. Hope you can find it easy:/


                           <33Cassie K'Lynn

~~~HeartsBurstIntoFire~~~

7:16 AM
March 23, 2010


Jules

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I FOUND IT !!!


http://www.poemsonly.com/new/h…..-56-31.php


I like the line “His hatred sins are forever forgotten”. In my case it was not my hatred sins; then I went from teddy-bear to polar dominair. But not to say in me, but, too bad for “loveless hearts”. Good work.


I'm always so interested in knowing what people's inspirations are to a given poem. Perhaps a mind meld?

5:32 PM
March 23, 2010


i_miss_you

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Well truely?? I thought of one thing from me adn Skyler then i just kept going on how i felt…


                     <33Cassie K'Lynn:]

~~~HeartsBurstIntoFire~~~

1:33 AM
June 24, 2010


Romeothe3rd

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Hello ^_^


   I would love to ask you both please .. are you on Allpoetry.com ….  because if you are I would love to know your names on there and add you since I just joined .. we really have never met .. but I really feel like you both are the only ones that I really know here … hehe … it is just a kind proposal :) .. please dont feel obliged  … ^_^ .. and I really would love to meet you one day ^_^ …. please take care and all the best to you ….


P.S    Or you can just add me :) … my name is the same on there ( Romeothe3rd ) ^_^

10:51 AM
June 24, 2010


i_miss_you

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Haha! You did already join!

Lol(:

WEll!

I used to be foreverNalways…

NOW!!!! I'm…—–>lost-in-stereo!!1

I Love AllPoetry!

~~~HeartsBurstIntoFire~~~
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