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11:20 PM
January 4, 2011


bar

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This is my first poem ever written..!! plz give ur valuable feedbacks poem name=the Tempest by (balu anthony raj).

2:45 AM
January 6, 2011


Ang

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I enjoyed your use of the extended metaphor and the poetic language used in your poem. I don't understand the last line. I would enjoy the poem more if it had appropriate line breaks, consider when formatting and uploading?
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