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Post edited 12:22 PM - September 11, 2009 by sura

Recently Hazem has published two poems-THE HOUSE MISSING YOU and IT`S JUST A KISS.

The house actually has missed some body. Both the titles have poetical justification along with the contents.Among the lines of the first poem that impressed me - Come back be more close than dreams.Such a belongings rarely felt not only in this line but also in different situations the cries have made a throbbing acceptance.

Style is  standard.I am not going to rate it because the feelings inside the poem is much more than this rating.

Thanks Hazem .

Your next poem about the kiss is really more than a kiss. Kisses,hug and love and then a beautiful dream in some body`s arms.Really romantic and more romantic is the lines like all sweet pigeons sing;the heaven opens its gates.

The poem has the strength to allow a sense of feeling if one slips to that moment.And more interesting has become the declaration of love as a part of battle and  it is !

Once again I thank for this poem.

SURENDRA PALLAI