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I had promised to come back with some remarks on the poems those I have read.Of-course they are my personal remarks and I request my esteemed poets not to mind for them.

God has created this universe if it`s so.The poets are also the creator of several universe.Every poem is a depiction of the poet`s world and when it is  published and comes to the lime light of this world then that becomes an inspiration and beating of others.In this regard I first of all pay my respect to all those creators.

Down Fall –   by. Josh.

Josh, Ihave gone through your poem and found the clarity in this poem.Drenched in emotion the poet has gone so far up to the end point to recall the ended love.But a true love never ends  it remains glowing even at the age of darkness. May be love a feeble light but the prominences of this light becomes more realsied when this mind becomes darker.

I liked the line —–    Distance is a killer, our love is a thriller.

It would assure to them those who are mourning for their love.

SURENDRA PALLAI                  surpalli@gmail.com.      also at http://www.poetryfreedom.blogspot.com