Community Forum

I am to write in briefly about six poems that I have gone through.

LOVE IS -Stephen - You have shown the other side of love and the risk in love.It is nicely poised.But for these reasons let people not be chicken hearted. Thanks, good attempt to show the bitterness towards love.ABOUT BEING LEAD TO THE SLAUGHTER.

THE ONLY GUY-MIYA - Hi Miya your poem doesn`t fulfill the desire of poetry.Poetry is some thing out of nothing and evrything inside a thing first try to understand this subtle sense and be drenched in emotion also.Still I liked this.

THE BATTLE- ANNIE WALKER- Annie I am sorry , you have not edited your poem before publishing it.Several spelling errors have been noticed.You should really join the fight and become a knight.That`s the real spirit of a patriot.

MIRROR - JOSHUA FELIX - Hello ! your mirror has just been simply a mirror not so opaque.Try to remove dusts and feel the real existence of a mirror.You have taken a good attempt.

SELF INTROSPECTION - NATE-You have given a great deal of restrainment and self controlling advice.Good,but practically now a days how far it is possible  living in a selfish society.Pl. show me a little path.I am also losing my grip some time.Next time do so.

WHY -JAZIMIN - I should first of all ask myself a question why I am reading your poem ? Carry on and next time give answer.

LIVE YOUR LIFE-NAE MAH- I think living one`s life to the full content may not be right choice.This life is not your life.Today,what you have become is due to the sacrifice of others.They may be your parents,friends or relatives even neigbours.You have also some duty for them and give such a call to every one and your poems would be more appealing.

RAMBLINGS TO A LOVED ONE - NIK FOREMAN -Nik you can also do so if you determine your mind and give up jumbling hopes.Your poem has got sensation but needs a bit modification.

The above remarks are completely by my own and others may differ to this.If I could have made any reverse remark then pl.don`t take in and be very casual.

Thanks !

 SURENDRA PALLAI